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**I was actually hoping to get Nick there, but OTHER PEOPLE are being slow about everything!! If they don't post soon, what do you say you and I write our own story, without them? Put it on Double Trouble Writing Huddle?
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(Sorry guys I'm trying to get Mable to post!)
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**Oki doki Ayumi, I'm all for that. :P Good Luck Alzz**
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**sorry guys, I started school and my internet was down for a while. Alice, please don't kill me. :D. Sorry if this doesn't help at all. I"m still in, just a tad lost.**


Kyle:

Kyle wasn't sure he liked the whole idea. But he wasn't about ot let Angel out of his site even if Tristian was going to be there. He wasn't sure he trusted Sybyla as much as Tristan did either. He sighed, whatever happened if anything happened to his friends he was going to get Syb if it was even in the least bit her fault.

Tristian:

Tristian could tell that Kyle wasn't liking the whole idea, but he had the option of leaving, he didn't have to stay. He smiled reassuringly at Syb as they got to the airport. He just hopped that the trouble that had always followed his parents didn't follow them as closely.
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Sybyla

We went through the airport to our gate, I turned and looked at everyone besides Nick, "you guys don't have to come you know," I said.

Tristian stepped to my side, "I'm coming."

"Me too," Angel said and then looked at her brother, "it's our turn, I'm not about to let you have all the fun."

Kyle sighed and stepped up too, "I'm not gonna be the only chicken."


Angel

Sybyla grinned, "we'll need all the help we can get," she said, "but you guys can turn around and walk away at any time."

I was starting to like her, I was sure now that we would become friends.
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Nick

I scoffed when she seemed to exclude me. Well, wasn't she nice...

I stepped up and led the way through the gate. "The sooner we get there, the better. When I see Edward, I'll tear him apart."
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Anney

I walked through the side door, knowing my way around perfectly fine. This room was the bathroom.

I turned on the shower, stripping quickly. I didn't know how long it would be until Edward came back, so I wanted to make this as fast as possible.

Tears streamed down my face, mixing with the hot water.

I thought of Nick and Syb, and whoever else she was bound to bring along. Please hurry.

As I got out of the shower and wrapped myself in one of the large, white towels, I began to wonder if any of my old clothes were left. I knew what I'd've liked to wear, but I didn't have the convenience of packing before coming.

Edward was sitting at my bed when I stepped out of the bathroom, still wrapped in a towel.

"What are you doing?" I growled, ignoring him as I opened the closet. All my old clothes were there - no jeans, no sweats, no t-shirts. Quite a few gowns though. I found one for sleeping in eventually.

"Waiting for you, darling," he replied, a smirk spreading across his face. Turning back around, I walked back toward the bathroom to change.

"I'd appreciate it if you left while I was changing." He caught my elbow, roughly spinning me around.
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Sybyla

I cringed at that bit of information, "Nick that's not a good idea."

He looked at me angrily, "why not? He's-"

"He'd kill you first. Don't worry though," I added quickly to Kyle who was looking at Angel worriedly, "we're not going to kill him yet."

Nick growled, "why not?"

"We're not going to attack him on his terf."
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Tristian:

Tristian wanted to tell her otherwise. But decided not to.

"Let's stop talking and get going." He replied.



Kyle:

Kyle wrapped his arms around Angel and took a deep breath. He wasn't sure if he liked this, but he was going with it.

"Let's just get this over with." He said.
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Edward

I held her in place; she couldn't get away from me if she tried. Like she couldn't stop me if I decided, in that split second, to take her as my own once and for all...

But I wouldn't be that harsh. I made myself be gentler, more pleasant. It was hard on my ego, but, if it would win her over...

I pulled her up to me, stealing another kiss from her as she clung desperately to the towel. To think that that was all that separated us... I turned away from the thought and released her, mouth and all.

"Don't think of me so poorly, my dear," I reminded her, watching as she scampered away, backwards, toward the bathroom. "I'm not the kind to force myself on a girl."

That didn't seem to work, so I changed my tone. I turned away, heading for the door. "I'll let you finish pampering. Then you can meet me downstairs, for dinner, perhaps?" It was more a demand than a question, but it was better than scaring her to death.

I closed the door behind me and strode down the hall, chuckling at how I affected her even now.
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Anney

I shuddered at the thought of joining Edward for dinner.

His touch was no different as before. He still desired me, as he always had. It disgusted me. To him I seemed to be more a toy than a person.

Not the kind to force myself on a girl.

I laughed as his words rang in my head again. It was a dry, almost angry laugh. I remembered him while enough to know better than that. He was conniving, he did what he had to to get what he wanted.

Put simply? He was playing me.
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*nudges forward*
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SOMEBODY DO SOMETHING!
I don't want this to die!!!
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