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Lizzie~

"I'm fine. I was in your room, but then snuck over here. No one even saw me." I smiled with a triumphant grin, relief evident in my eyes.
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Sydney:

I smiled and pulled her into my arms, kissing her cheek. she was so adorable. she was my little angel. "I'm glad your okay. I told you it could get ugly!" I kissed her cheek again, burrying my face into her hair and smelling her wonderful scent.




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Lizzie~

"It did! It got very ugly. The sailors out there are killers! I bet your crew will teach them a lesson or two!" I said with a grin.
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Sydney:

I frowned. "Yeah...unfortuntely." I looked at Julios. "I have to go back out there, make sure my orders are followed and that everyone is okay. Not to mention I'm captian, and I can't sit here and just let them fight if i'm not willing to do that myself." I looked at Julios sadly. "Take care of Lizzie for me. izd die if she got hurt!" I rushed back out to the battlefield.




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"Lizze, have you ever shot a pistol?" Julios asked always needing a plan. "if you have here." Julios spun the pistol in his hand and extended it to her handle first. "If anyone comes near you that you don't know point and pull. Understand." Julios checked one of the cannons to make sure it was loaded. Satisfied it was he aimed it cloer to the Royal Navy ship and fired. There was a shower of wood from just under the water and the ship began to suck in tons of water. "That takes care of their retreat and a little revenge." Julios leaned gainst a bulkhead and waited with his rifle aimed at the door.
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**Stil in the hold with tristan. they haven't moved since your last post**

Tristan:

I looked at her nervously. suddenly a sailor burst in. "Well, isn't this a pretty little girl. why don't you and I have some fun?"

I growled and ran him through with my sword. There was no way I was going to let him hurt her. I didnzt care who it was, I was willing to give my life for her.




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Lizzie~

I looked dubiously at the pistol. Sure, I'd handled one beofre. How could you not after 5 years on a pirate ship? But I hated every time that i had to. They scared me. I shrugged. I would just have to go on. I wondered if there would be anymore peaceful days upon the ship. Those were the best days. Sydney and I would sit on the observation deck and watch the sea, the birds, everything. We had the best talks, and sometimes we just sat. Oh well, I thought. THis was a typical pirates' life and I was used to it.
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Cara----

Cara looked at Tristian surprised. He had earned her respect and trust now. She looked at the dead salior, "Aren't you going to get in trouble for that?" She asked looking at him surprised.


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Tristan:

I smiled. "Not since it was a royal navy salor. they've stormed the ship. a man aboard this ship would never act like that towards a lady. the captain wouldn't allow it. And I didn't like the way he was talking about you." I blushed and looked down at my feet.




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Cara----


"Well if they stormed the ship what are we doing down here?" She demanded grabbing the dead guys sword. "If I dont' want to get found out or anything I better help." She ran up two of the steps. "Coming?"
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Tristan:

I nodded and rushed after her. "Please donzt get hurt." I begged, looking at her. I didn't know why, but I didn't want her to get hurt. I sighed and watched her walk up the stairs. I wanted to kiss her, but I was pretty sure she would kill me.




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Cara----

Cara just ran up the stairs not saying anything. She felt all weird that he wanted her to stay safe, but she wasn't going to say anything. She saw a salior that was from the Royal Navy, he was facing the other way so she ran her sword through his heart. She moved on to fight another Royal Navy person. She had rarely used a sword before, but she had better learn if she wanted to stay alive.
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Sydney:

I glared at the scene below. I rounded the remaining few men up in the center. "Officers go down to the brig, and the others get put into a row boat." One of the officers looked over and blushed when I noticed. (Happybear) I sighed. "Cabin boys and girls, I want this deck mopped spotless, and the bodies tossed overboard. Oh, and Tristan, who's your friend?"

tristan:

"Friend of the family. Needed a job. thought she could help. Hope you donzt mind."

"That's fine. she better learn quick." I watched as the captain went into her cabin, closing the door behind her.




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Cara---

Cara looked at Tristan. What was she supposed to do now. "what do I do?" She asked softly looking at him.
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