Pirate

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Tristan:

"Stick close to me. we need to help clean the floors." I grabbed two bucks. "Want to help?" I asked softly, gazing into her eyes.




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Cara---

"Ya." She said looking up. "What do I do?"
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Tristan:

"I'll show you." I took her hand and took her to a secluded part of the ship where people would be less likely to recognize her. I took out the brush and started moving it up and down, as I knelt on my knees. she looked at me. I sighed and pulled her down, placing my hands over hers and showing her how to move the brush. my whole body tingled from feeling her. I groaned inwardly and released. "Like that. do you understand now?"




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Cara----

Cara didn't underatand the feelings that went through her when he touched her, but she didn't do anything. "Ya." She said taking the brush and doing as he had shown her.
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Tristan:

I helped mop the desk even though it wasnzt tecnically my job. I tried not to look at the gorgeous girl next to me, but I failed and kept glancing at her. She was wonderful. I groaned. like she would ever be interested in me.




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Cara----

Cara moved the brush until she was done. "Now what?" She asked looking at Tristian, she didn't want to blush when she caught him watchign her, but she knew she did. He was handsome, no doubt.

Guys are mean, bad, not good, don't fall for him. It will never work, not a pirate! Her mind screamed.
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Tristan:

"I have to go up onto the rat lines and help tie up the sails." I sighed. "You can go ask the cook if she needs help." I looked at her sadly. I didn't want to leave her alone. "I'm sorry I have to leave. I have a job to do. if anyone tries anything, come get me. Okay?"




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Cara----

Cara nodded, "Alright." She watched him move skillfully up the rat lines and she moved towards the kitchen to look for the cook to see what she could do.
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Julios:

Julios policed the unused pistol from lizzy and walked off in search of more cloth to put over his acheing wound. It was only where a small rapier (sword) had nicked his side but it was bleeding like crazy. He found a piece of cloth and folded it over. He put it under the rope and walked up onto the main deck to inspect the ship for damage.
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Sydney:

I walked out of my cabin and saw Julios standing there. My heart sped up and I started breathing faster. "Hey." I said nervously, standing beside him, fidgeting nervously with my hands. Why did he make me act like this?! why couldnzt I just relax?!




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Julios:

"Hello Cap...Sydney, I was just cursing the Rayal Navy for all the bullet holes. If they arms them with pistols and rifles they need to be taught how to shoot them with out tearing up everything." Julios realized that was the longest sentace he had ever stung together to Sydney. "How are you doing, do you need some rest."
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Sydney:

I laughed. "Probably. but since when do I ever take a break?" I smiled tiredly. I saw his hand on the railing and cautiously entertwined my fingers with his, biting my lip and completely nervous inside. "Did...did you mean? What you said earlier? Do...do..." I took a deep breath and looked away. "Do you love me?"




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"Well... yeah. I did mean it." Julios closed his fingers locking hers to his. "I did mean it" Julios was proud he had fianlly gotten the courage to say that.
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Sydney:

I sighed in relief. "I...I think I love you too." I said, taking a deep breath and waiting for his reaction.




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Julios:

Useing their locked hands as an advantage he spun Sydney around to face him and kisses her. He didnt care who saw, only that it was happing.
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-If the world is going to end soon, so be it. It can end without me. Myself
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