Pirate

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Tristan:

I smiled and showed her how to hold the sword and taught her the basics of handling the weapon. I blushed every time my hand touched hers. sudeenly, the cook was calling us to diner and the sun had set.

sydney:

I heard the call and nodded. "I'll have diner in my cabin. and tell Julios to come and dine with me. I have buisness I need to discuss with him." I walked into my cabin and quickly untangled my hair.




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Cara---

Cara handed back his sword and followed him towards where the food was.

*tears*
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Tristan:

I smiled and after we had gotten our food, I pulled her towards a deserted part of the ship where the stars were visible. "Beautiful isn't it?" I commented.




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Julios was awakened by a kick in tthe leg. "The captain wants you in her cabin Julios." Julios couldn't see who was standing in front of him and he was still to asleep to tell who it was from the voice. "Tell her, I'm coming."
who ever had come to get him walked away the way he presumed they had come.

julios pushed himself up and began his walk to Sydney's cabin. He looked out a veiw port as he passed and failed to see anything outside. He quickly realized that it meant it was night and his pace increased.
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Sydney:

I bit my lip, anxious. I wanted to pace, but I knew that wasn't a good thing. actually, I didn't know anything about this subject. as a pirate, anyone who tried to come near me, I killed. as a captain, I wasn't allowed to fall in love. and yet I had. I looked at the food, not even hungry. I sighed with relief when there was a knock on my door. "Come in." I said hoarsly. There stood Julios. I wanted to run over and cover him with kisses! But all I could do was sit there and stare at him miserably.




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Cara---

Cara nodded, "It's amazing out here. completely different then what I used to have to look at." She sighed trying to forget about all of the stuff she had put up with back at home. She sighed, it was so peaceful otu here. She felt safe next to Tristan too.
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Julios limped into the open door. "Hi Sydney." he said before moving to her and putting his arms around her waist. "How are you?"
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Sydney:

I sighed and wrapped my arms around him. "wonderful now that your here." I smiled then frowned. "Are you okay?! You were limping."

Tristan:

I smiled. "I know nothing about you. What are you used to seeinge" I asked kindly, looking deeply into her eyes.




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Cara----

Cara kept her eyes guarded. "Well, I-I was a-" How was she supposed to say that she was a slave for a very rich guy. "I was a slave." She said clenching the side of the boat her nails screaming in pain as she dug them into the wood.
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Tristan:

I growled. "I hate people who own other people! Do they not realize that slaves are people too with thoughts and feelings?!" I growled. Then noticed her staring. I blushed. "Sorry, I just...don't like slave owners. One of the reasons why I became a pirate." I looked away. "do I get to hear the story?" I asked softly.




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Cara---

Cara shrugged, "Well, there isn't much to tell." She sighed, "I was born into it and worked inside the house. My owner's son took a liking to me, though it was one way. Sense I was a slave I couldn't say much, but managed to keep away from him best I could. When I saw the crates at the port I got in one and here I am." She replied not looking at him.
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Tristan:

I looked over to her. "I'm so sorry!" Before I could think, I tipped her chin up gently and kissed her lips lightly, softly, delicately. I released her. "I...I'm so sorry!" I blushed and looked down at my feet. "I wasn't thinking. I shouldn't have done that..." I rushed, still not looking at her. she would hate me now. "You just look so beautiful...and...and..." I stuttered, not knowing what to say and sounding like a complete idiot.




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Cara---

Cara's lips tingled. "It's ok," She said smiling and moving his face so he was looking at her. She stood on tiptoes and gently kissed him. She pulled back and looked back out over the ocean. She didn't know why she had done that, but it had been amazing.
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Tristan:

"So...your not mad at me?" I asked.

She shook her head no. I smiled and kissed her again. I loved the sensation. My body tingled as I kissed her. I pulled away, breathless. "Wow..." I breathed.




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"I will be fine. Its a minor inconvenionce." Julios said as he stood with his arms at her waist. "So, Captain. What are my orders?" Julios asked his voice fluctuating.
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