Come closer, my pretties. (Re-Opened!)

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Would you, please? =D

Done, darlings.

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If youre not too flooded, please?

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Chapter 2, thank you!

How about it? Lol, hope you don't mind critiquing this for me!

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Hey, Penguin! I only have one critique on this, and I really need help with it.

5 stories for Cal's Contest

-Jared

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic37843.html

Could you rip this apart please?

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If you have time, please?

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic34323.html

I shalt ask thee these questions three: Can thou review this piece, please. Can thou help me to make this piece better. And can thou review the other capters ???

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Next Scavenger, please?

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If you've got the time, I'd like it if you'd look at this. It's a longer story, to be split into parts for the viewing ease of everyone. If you don't want to review each and every part of it, I understand.

prologue and chapter 1 need reviews ^_^


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Pengu my darling!

How I miss your reviews.

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Pretty please?

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Hi Pengu! If you would rip this to pieces I would appreciate you.

I know I asked you to review a work called The Masquerade. Disregard that. I'm not going to work with that anymore.

I know you have many critiques to do but if you don't mind doing reviewing mine, that would be awesome!!

It's a short story.
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Please and thank you!
-Zehra