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PenguinAttack · 2008-04-04T03:46:01Z

My petals of infinite petalness! I'm here today to wring you a bargain like never before! (disclaimer; bargain may have, indeed, been presented before) I am offering critiques, reviews, comments, my love spead across the toast of the literary - and imaginary arts! It's quite amazing, really. This one-time-only-but-maybe-for-a-while offer is only for poetry at the moment. Any kind of poetry. If I really, really love you, or am not terribly busy, I will review some other works, but you'll have to understand poetry take priority. AT THE MOMENT NO NOVELS/SHORT STORIES OR NON-FIC. If you want something in particular - grammar, imagery, metaphors, the second son of the third Roman line - looked at, tell me when you post the link. The more info I get on what you need, the more helpful I can be. So. Come one, come all. Love me in literacy. Also... You taste like review. Let's find out what kind. *Hearts* Le Penguin.

misstoria

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Fri Jan 27, 2012 3:00 am

misstoria says... · Fri Jan 27, 2012 3:00 am

I'd love if you'd review this and tell me what you think:
viewtopic.php?f=8&t=92963
Just a F.Y.I. there are two poems in this topic both on the idea of "Life is...."

You are more than the choices that you've made, you are more than the sum of your past mistakes. You are more than the problems you create, You'v been remade.

http://writemeaway.blogspot.com/

Lava

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Sat Jan 28, 2012 7:37 am

Lava says... · Sat Jan 28, 2012 7:37 am

Dude?Pretty please?
viewtopic.php?f=17&t=92984

You know it's cuz ILU sooo much. <3

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Pretending in words was too tentative, too vulnerable, too embarrassing to let anyone know.
- Ian McEwan in Atonement

sachi: influencing others since GOD KNOWS WHEN.

LadySpark

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Thu Feb 09, 2012 2:55 am

LadySpark says... · Thu Feb 09, 2012 2:55 am

Hello LoveyPenguin!

Would you pretty please review this poem of mine?
I'm not really looking for grammar. More, execution and ideas and flow, and such.Also the feeling you got when you read it. I know I have to submit something for you to review for the Christmas Poetry contest eventually, so why not now? xD
work.php?id=93277

hush, my sweet

these tornadoes are for you

-Richard Siken

Formerly SparkToFlame