Want a Crit?

me wants blue star!

If you need a crit on anything, post a link here. I will pretty bogged down with homework for about 2 days, but I should hopefully be a lot better after that.

I want 35O reviews!

I'd love it if you reviewd any of my work. All Eyes On Us needs some help...

~JFW1415

I'll get to it

if you get an chance i'd appreciate a review of this >
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> NN -- Prologue: Black Water, Red flame

It's very rough. Heh.

Thanks! =)

Umm do you know about Naruto? Cause I have a fan-fiction about it. Its called Wind Demon. Please look at it. Tell me what you think of it.

Glass Eyes

I'd be much obliged if you critiqued my poem; see if you can guess what it's about. If you need any reviews, just post them in my "Offering Ginger Critiques" threads, and I'll jump to them.

:3

Assuming you're still doing this, you can review Crocodile Teeth.

Thanks!

Prokaryote

I'm trying to get a blue star as well!

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I'd love a crit on these two!

Gah! I forgot about th is thread!

I will get to them!

This thread seems pretty dead...
... it's time I brought it back to life!

(RUNAWAY) Chapter One: paralyzed [Part One]

Thanks Aedomir!

- Camille xx

I have a poem thats need more reviewing: topic29375.html

Here's what I was talking about (I posted it earlier than I planned.)

Part One
Part Two

And I'm reading yours now!

~JFW1415

Hello!


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Please and Thank You

OverEasy

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It's a short story..

I have very few reviews and I posted about a week or so ago...

i need all the help i can get with it as I'm sending bits of it in to an author friend of mine soon and then he'll see what he can do.

Thanks so much if you could get to it.