z
Cool beginning, but part of me is looking out for the cliches that I think are coming next. Here's hoping my search will be barren, sa? ^_~
not even bothering to look up as she resumed her work grading the assignments my class had handed in today
rows of steel-gey lockers
"I didn't have a detention, but I stayed behind to get the work I missed while I was sick a couple days ago."
peppering the street with tiny silver explosions as each one fell and broke in its turn.
and crept farther away
Beautiful and sad.
Not in the same room where I'd spent every after-school since the first day of junior high.
That perfect face, pale and streaked with rain. So beautiful...
I shook my head, disgusted by my reaction, and crept further away, desperate not to be seen. I tried not to dwell on the conversation I had just heard, tried not to remember.
Well, I'm not paralyzed, but I seem to be struck by you...
Rain sheeted down from wolf-grey clouds, peppering the street with tiny silver explosions as each one fell and broke in its turn.
What song is that from? I hear it on the radio all the time, but I don't know who it is.]
familiar cool edges of my Ipod
The house rang with an eerie silence ---- Once again, the house rang with silence. The squeak of my socked feet on the stairs seemed eerily loud, almost unnatural.
"You've gotta come in now. It's bedie-by time now."
A soft creak: the door opening.
Gender:
Points: 1609
Reviews: 602