Maximum Ride: The New Breed

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[Nate]

"You guys, we need to get everyone out of here. There must be plenty of other experiments that we have no clue about. I know that we're almost out of time, but we have to try and get everyone out," Nate said. "Who's with me?"

*sorry. All I got. And Mark, yeah. Just find some creative way to get out!*

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this looks like fun

Name: Rose

Age:13

Characteristics: Small, Long brown hair, bright green eyes, snow white wings streaked with gold

Personality:Blurts out what ever is on her mind which often gets her in trouble. Takes instructions quickly, is naive and very loyal.

Side: Escape

Special traits: Can influence people's emotions.
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*For anyone who is going to enter from now on, make sure that your special traits aren't too absurd. As you know, Maximum Ride series has nothing too out of this world. Reading minds is about as wacky as it gets. Shapeshifting? Come on.*

*no need to change if you already have an profile though*

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Sam listened as the scientists were running around like mad men. He slowly lite a cigarette and watched in amusement. He knew it had to be Nate. Only he would be so bold. Not only that Max had just arrived so that also meant trouble. He wasn't going to help them escape, but he wont stay here for long either.

An older came up to him, "What are you doing Sam, help us stop them."

He just took another puff on his cigarette, "Why should I?"

"You piece of..." the man went to punch him, but Sam caught it, "What?"

"Don't do that again, understand?"

The man cradled his hand as he left.

Filthy creature. I may not like them, but I want to leave. I'll use them and then be on my way. He made his way down a back stair case that lead to the containment room. He walked in and was nearly hit in the head with a metal pole, but he ducked.

"I'm sorry." said a girl, but he ignored her.

"Nate, looks like you could use some help."

"Sam, why are you here? What reason could you have for helping us?" Nate looked at him angrily.

"We're both sick of this place. I don't like it any more than you do, but what choice do we have? Peace until we're in the clear?" He raised his hand.
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Name: ZT

Age: About 13

Characteristics: Scar over his right eye, strong (comparing to normal super-strength for the experiments). 5'10", long-ish brown hair, brown eyes (kind of like me on appearances, I'm not that tall, though). Large wings, about 14 foot span, silvery in color.

Personality: Iffy. Nobody really knows what he's like. His attitude changes....

Side: Wants to be free, but not desperately. He likes being a captive until he can come up with a plan to escape and to destroy the whitecoats. He knows he'll have more time to think about it in the solitude of a cage than outside being chased by other experiments.

Special Traits: Very precise. He has good balance, quick reflexes, and can hold extremely still. Also, the scar over his eye? Well, that happened during his mutation, and they had to replace the eye. The new one can zoom in and see a lot farther than the average human eye.

Okay, so I'm going to have to read the story and try to catch on, but hopefully I'll figure this out.
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(ZT)

I was sitting in my cage. Alone. I was, like, the only flippin' one of the experiments who had to be all alone in a room. I smiled. It was because I was too smart. Too likely to have a plan. But still... was a compliment reason enough to have to eat alone, sleep alone... think alone?

A whitecoat came in and pulled open my cage door.

I was also one of the few that they let walk through the halls without a cage.

Probably because of all my raw muscle. It made me a lot heavier than other avians, therefore harder to carry. But I was also a lot less likely to run off. I had been given trust by the whitecoats. It had taken a long time, but it finally worked. And that was how I would escape. Eventually. But not yet, I didn't have a good plan yet.

And that was when I heard the news.

They caught Max. All the flock, except Angel. Good job for her.

And that was when my plan came together. Finally! If the flock had been captured, that meant that the whitecoats would have to take a lot of men to take care of them. So I could help the other experiments escape, and we could bust out of here. And create our own flock--a much bigger one. Maybe we could even get Max out too! It was all coming into action.

I was walking down the hall with just one whitecoat. I could take him down so easily. And then through a small hole in the wall I saw something. A shimmering, and someone coming into sight from seemingly nowhere. Another experiment.

Perfect, I thought, my hands already flexing.
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[Blade]

"I saw how the others opened their cages," Mayze replied, "Push against the lock on the count of three alright?"

Blade nodded.

"One, two, three!"

It took a couple of tries and Blade was breathing heavy when it finally happened, but eventually the cage snapped open sending Blade sprawling on the ground.

She couldn't believe it. She stood up, cautiously and adjusted her wings slightly. FREE! F-R-frikkin- E-E!!!

"We need to get the others right?" Blade asked.

Mayze nodded.

"Catch up with you later then," and she took off running. From the few times she had been out of her cage, Blade knew there were a couple other experiments down the hall to her right. She tried to make her footsteps quieter but they echoed through the halls anyway. Time to set some others free!

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(umm who still needs to escape?)




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Name:Lexy

Age:14

characteristics:once she gets a bruise it's there forever

personality:She always has a smart remark. Speaks her mind even when she should just keep her mouth shut. She's up for anything sneaky or tricky.

Side:She would love to escape but at the same time she feels as if she was made to distroy

special traits:she can hack into anything, be under water for a long amount of time, run fast for a long period of time.
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I laid on top of the table with my hands and feet straped in. I felt my throat closing up whatever they were going to do to me it was going to hurt... and they didn't even care.
"Help me!" I screamed. I wish someone heard but I had to be strong for the other kids that were after me. I closed my blue eyes feeling my black hair fall off of the table... it was that long already? I needed to be saved but how? I needed someone to rescue me... yeah like that's ever going to happen. I fought against the straps I grunted and clenched my teeth together. I took a breath. They were going to make me become more distructive that I already was. Either that or I just woudn't come out alive...

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[Nate]

I was out of breath. There were so many rescues. So many free experiments running around. The whitecoats had apparently noticed all of the escapees and they were trying to catch them, but we are too powerful.

I turned a corner and - smashed into Blade. "Ow!" I cried and she rubbed her head.

"Nate!" Blade yelled.

"Yeah, it's me! Hurry! We have to rescue the others!"

Suddenly, Blade and I heard a faint yell, "Help me!" coming from the experimental room. We looked at each other and darted towards.
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I closed my eyes as I felt people coming down the hallway I knew they were just going to experment but I felt so wound-up about it. When the door burst open the hinges came off and I shut my eyes so tightly I thought they'd bleed. What were they going to do to me?
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Sam helped one of the others out of a cadge when he heard a scream. He sighed and ran for it, he knew it was close. He stopped outside an experiment room and opened the door. Inside was a young girl about to be injected. "You filthy dogs."

One of the men turn around, but Sam kicked his so hard he fell to the ground with out moving. the other tried to use the needle to stab him, but he caught the guys wrist and snapped it in half. He gave a painful yelp before Same kneed him in the jaw breaking it.

"You never learn do you." A second later Nate arrived with someone else.
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(I know I'm writing a little too much but I'm really bored)

LEXY

I opened my blue eyes as I looked down and saw one of the white jackets on the floor. The person that just killed him was just like me. I didn't want to come off creepy, I mean the guy just saved my butt but i just had a feeling and I speak my mind... even when I shouldn't. I looked the one who just killed the white jacket in the eyes and said.

"I really wouldn't have done that." I said my eyes growing as cold as my expression.
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[Blade]

What the heck?! Blade thought, totally confused now. A boy with black hair and a cold expression had killed a whitecoat to save the girl we had heard. And she was mad?

Oy.


The boy opened his mouth to respond, but Blade cut in, "Look, I'm sure we'd all love to stay and chat but uhh no time, let's go!"




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(ZT)

I heard a commotion just on the other side of the wall. The wall I was walking right next to.

I reached out and threw the whitecoat backwards, knocking him out. Then I curled into a ball and hurled myself through the wall.

I checked the area to make sure there wasn't any danger. Seeing none, I turned toward the experiments. They were running away down the hall, opening cages.

I ran with them, trying to find out how to help.

"How do I help?" I called to one, who seemed to be the leader. I found out later his name was Nate.

I was with the new flock.
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