Until the End

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I heard a scream of pain. Of burning.

The two young men looked at each other, startled, but I had heard that scream far too many times to ignore it.

I rushed in before either of them even moved.
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"A guardian stone." Izlude knelt down, but didn't touch it. "He does want the God Stone."

"What's a guardian stone?" One of the girls asked.

"If you have ten of them, they are said to lead you to the god stone, but..."

Nate put his hand on Izludes shoulder, "They can only be made by killing someone you loved in cold blood. If this had remained in Thorn, she'd be dead right about now."
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Thorn-

Everyone was staring at the stone. Thorn was awake, and feeling the pain of everything happening.

"Guardian stone..." Thorn mumbled.

Her 'father' already had 7, from family and friends. Thorn closed her eyes- maybe now she could rest.




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"Flip it." I said. "Well, what are you going to do?"

"What are we going to do." somebody corrected. "We can't have yone wandering around saying this has happened.

"But, I mean," I said lamely. "I don't want to be in a fight."

"None of us do," said Warren.

"We've all lost someone," Zip said, looking pointedly at me. "But we have to go on. And I don't know, maybe this will stop it."

I took a step closer to the stone, bending down to it.

"Don't touch it!" the young man kneeling by it warned.

"I'm not going to." I said, dragging my gaze away. I looked at Thorn.

"She's sleeping." the healer said softly.

"So what now?"
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Thorn-


"It is your destiny to destroy the world. To murder ever living thing on this planet. To stop the flow of hope, and chance for new life." A voice echoed.

Thorn grabbed her head. She didn't want to believe this.

"I don't wat to destroy everything!" Thorn screamed.

"Yes, but you wish to destroy the God stone." It giggled.




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Kaoli-

The moment the stone was pulled out of the girl the voice raged to life inside of her. Kaoli shook her head desperately, she'd already lisened to the voice once and it had cost her everything. Never again she had sworn, and she would keep that promise. Kaoli studied the stone nervously, focusing on the hear and now to block out the past.

Cautiously, Kaoli leaned forward and prodded the stone with her sheathed sword. The stone flashed bright red, lighting up the room. Almost without thinking everyone leapt away from the stone. Instinctively knowing how dangerous it was.

*sorry all I got*


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Thorn-

She opened her eyes to see a red light. It caused her to squint. A strange feeling came over her. Thorn felt so angry- gazing over the counter. She saw a knife. Thorn wanted blood and right now. She jumped out of bed so fast nobody noticed. Thorn grabbed the knife and lundged at Kaoli.


"blood...." Thorn moaned.




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Warren-

Warren jumped and grabbed ahold of Thorn pinning her hands to her side and knocking the knife from her hands.

"Thorn, calm down now. I'll knock you out if I have to."



*Grrr.*
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*hey, when is the town getting attacked?*



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can someone review my storybook. Zola Chronicles: Will of Fire.
DANCE- Like no-one is watching
LOVE- Like you've never been hurt
SING- Like no-one is listening
LIVE- Like it's heaven on earth.

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**uh-oh...I lost my character? Help me please?**
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*Just go into the Healer's tent that's glowing red, we're all in there.*

Thorn's eyes rolled in her head and she snarled at Warren. I lunged forward, wanting to help, but I didn't know how.

I took a few steps towards her. Warren still had her pinned securely to the bed. The Healer had stepped back, at a loss for what to do.

I reached out cautiously and touched my hand to her forehead. I drew the heat out of her slowly, calming her slightly, though her body was still rigid as if in a fit.

"Thorn?" said Tamara from behind me. "Thorn can you hear me?"
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If you're all in it, then I know where I am now


Bella--

I stood next to Nathan in the healer's tent.



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Thorn-

Everything was swiming around in Thorn's head. It seemed she was convinced that blood would make it go away. It didn't matter who's blood it was only that she could spill it.

Thorn struggled to brake free. Warren couldn't hold her for long. She headbutted him and lunged towards Bella- her knife piercing her.




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I grabbed Thorn's wrist and twisted it as hard as I could. She yelped in pain and dropped the knife. *sorry Maki*

Warren grabbed her other arm. I knew we should have tied her down but all eyes were on the newly injured girl.

The Healer, who seemed like a kind woman rushed over to her, and began rummaging, unbuttoning the blouse that was quickly stained crimson.

"This isn't good." I said. Behind me, Tamara put her hand on Thorn's head. She was burning up again.

"What can we do?" she asked. I relinquished my hold on the girl's wrist, knowing that Tamara, being part elf, would be stronger than I.

I glanced at the girl on the ground, but kept my distance, there were already people milling around her.

"We need to tie Thorn down," *sorry again* I said.

"There's rope in the corner." Warren said.

I took the rope and began to secure Thorn to the bed. It didn't feel right at all to keep her prisoner, but what else could we do?
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Tamara-

Tamara held Thorn down and looked in her eyes. "Don't use the rope, she'll get through it, she is being possesed or something." Tamara quickly pulled rock through teh door and incased all but Thorn's head in it. "Sorry my friend." She stepped back and Warren steadied her with his hand. Moving the rock had been hard.


Warren-

"So, how is she?" He asked looking at the healer and Bella.
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