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Until the End

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how about thorn and your character meet at the market?




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I have more than one, but I'll think about it. I may have an idea. Give me 10 minutes.
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Izlude and Meliodoul entered the city of Kon around high noon. Izlude was still a little worried about coming, but Meliodoul had not a care in the world. She started to walk off, but Izlude grabbed her, "We need supplies first."

"Fine."

They made their way to the market place where Meliodoul began gathering items while Izlude looked around. He saw a girl hiding behind a corner, she seemed worried. "Meliodoul?"

"Yes."

"We'll meet her in one hour, agreed?"

"Sure brother."

He nodded and walked up to the girl. She didn't notice him right away and when she did she squealed. "I didn't mean to scare you, but you seem troubled, can I help?" She turned her head. "My name is Izlude, what's yours."
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Meliodoul made her way down the main street when she ran across two girls sitting against a wall. She walked over and knelt down, Is she okay?"

"Yeah," said one, "she just needs some rest is all."

Meliodoul pulled out a piece of jerky, "Will this help?"
Last edited by piepiemann22 on Wed Feb 20, 2008 1:50 am, edited 1 time in total.
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*Pretend I didn't tell you my name*

"I don't tell my name to complete strangers." She moaned.

He sighed- feeling the resent in her tone." Are you hungry." He said as he pulled out a piece of jerky.

Thorn quickly grabbed it. She began to chew on it.

"Yummmmy, jerky..." She said.




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**Okay, so quite obviously I've missed a lot. Who's the girl dancing, and can someone bring my character in please? I'd really appreciate it....**
i carry your heart(i carry it in my heart) <3

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The girl dancing was my character, Zip.

Zip-

I smiled at the girl, Tysa, once i had made sure that the man i had seen was no longer in view.

"So what brings you to Kon, my friend?" i asked, pulling the tin full of coins over to me using a toe. I sized up the money inside, grinned and emptied it into a pouch hanging from my belt. That was enough for at least a weeks lodging and food, if not more.

Nathan-

I walked through the streets, my eyes downcast so not to catch the glare of the sun that shone directly in front of me. Only when i accidentally ran into someone did i look up.

"Sorry," i mumbled, looking up to see a dark-haired, blue-eyed girl brushing herself off.

**There you go, Bella.**
Be the cartoon heart. Light a fire, light a spark. Light a fire, flame in my heart. We'll run wild, we'll be glowing in the dark.




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Bella--

I looked up at the boy, and immediatly felt my cheeks changing colors.

"It's all right," I murmured in reply, my eyes not leaving his steady gaze.

*Ah, my first post and it's short...*
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can someone bring my character in, Kaoli
DANCE- Like no-one is watching
LOVE- Like you've never been hurt
SING- Like no-one is listening
LIVE- Like it's heaven on earth.

Please read and review my novel. The title is Fireborn. Here's the link.

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*I'm guessing Meliodoul was offering the jerky to Zip...*

"The sea," I answered. "I wanted to see it,"

She tipped the money into her purse. "And? Does it impress?"

I was about to answer when another girl came over.

"Is she okay?" she asked, looking pointedly at Zip.

"Yeah," I answered, "she just needs some rest is all."

She pulled out a piece of jerky, "Will this help?"

"That's a bit random," I said, as Zip thanked her for it.

"Anything I can do to help," she said. "I'm Meliodoul."

"Tysa. This is Zip." Zip was chewing.

"What brings you to Kon then? You look as out of place here as we do."
"Stella. You were in my dream the other night. And everyone called you Princess." -Lauren2010




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Zip-

I glanced at the girl, still nibbling absently at the Jerky, trying to sort out my thoughts.

"Oh, i live here." i said, gesturing around me. "Moved here about a year ago, after the draconians attacked my town, killing my brother..."

I could not stop my eyes from again roaming the crowds, even though i knew he wasn't there.


Nathan-

I stared back at the girl. "Are you alright?"

She nodded. Then, she said, "You're not from around here, are you?"

"No, I'm not. I'm a...scholar studying at...the Great Library in Jescor. My master asked me to travel here to collect something for him." i lied. I didn't want people knowing i was a mage unless i could help it. Less attention drawn to myself the better.
Be the cartoon heart. Light a fire, light a spark. Light a fire, flame in my heart. We'll run wild, we'll be glowing in the dark.




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"And you Meliodoul? You look pretty on guard, with one hand on your hilt." I said, looking at the sheath hanging from her belt, and the fist curled loosely around it.

She let it go, as if realising it hadn't been there.

Zip was still searching the crowd, I left her to it. I remembered the first few markets I went to, where every face was Mother's or a friend's.

I shuffled away slightly. The memory brought the heat back flickering around me, suddenly it was burning against my skin, begging me to light a fire. I tried to shake it away.
"Stella. You were in my dream the other night. And everyone called you Princess." -Lauren2010




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(Crap...somehow i lost myself...will somebody bring me back in?? :'(
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*I'll try to bring you in Luna. Maki, you were last getting jerky off Izlude, were you not??? Sorry, I can't see a way of getting both in...*

Tysa sat against the wall and breathed deeply, looking out on the sea, the opposite of the flames.

Just then, something threw her off guard as a large grey wolf padded past and looked straight at her, his expression almost questioning.

"Blind Seer!" called a girl a couple of metres away.
"Stella. You were in my dream the other night. And everyone called you Princess." -Lauren2010



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