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Wolven

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<<The packs need to communicate. Somehow. Maybe they should have some meeting each moon or something.>>

Fadalia trotted through the trees. I wonder where my mate has gone... she thought, I hope he is okay. She was so wound up in thought that she almost fell into a ditch. "I could have twisted my paw" she grumbled, [/i] That reminds me! I have to deal with that wolf.[/i] She exclaimed. She lifted her nose to the air and scented for herbs. She shot into a bush and came out seconds later holding small shrubs in her jaws. Now just for some food she wondered, I know I can get that deer that Kirany gave to me. She ran out of the forest and retraced her steps back to where she had been standing earlier on. There it was the plump deer! She grabbed it and ran towards the den.




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Kirany came out of her den and lifted her nose, a Grizzly bear was coming!
"OOOWWWWWWWWWWW!" She started howling, the howl was telling the leader to come to her. She continued her howling. She stopped for a moment and put her nose in the air again, the bear was coming closer and closer, she started howling again.
[Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard appears "We have weasels now!"
[Firearris] 10:45 pm: askes the guard for the weasel!
[Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard gives Firearris the Weasel.
[Firearris] 10:46 pm: aquires the weasel and renames it "Cat"

Take that, Lumi.




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Fadalia's head shot up. Her elegant curved ears swiveled towards the sound of a howl. The moon had risen into the nigh sky and puffs of white smoke bellowed out of her maw. She snorted and quickly dug a hole beside a large oak tree. She dropped the deer and the herbs into the whole. She used her hind legs to kick the cool earth back into the hole. Once she was finished she raised her head to the moon and let out a reassuring bark howl to Kirany. Her body stood against the dark night letting of a sense of proudness and beauty. With that she pelted into the trees to rescue her friend.




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Kirany stopped howling when she heard noise. She grizzly jumped out of the bushes and tried to swat at her. She yelped and jumped away. She bear swatted again and did hit her. The bear scratched and growled at the injured wolf.




Firearris
[Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard appears "We have weasels now!"
[Firearris] 10:45 pm: askes the guard for the weasel!
[Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard gives Firearris the Weasel.
[Firearris] 10:46 pm: aquires the weasel and renames it "Cat"

Take that, Lumi.




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Fadalia raced through the trees. The ground was a blur beneath her paws and her pink tongue lolled out between her jaws. She could smell her own waves or fear and anger exiting from her body and coming from the trees ahead. She could tell she was nearing her friend so she brought up the pace to a sprint.
She burst into the clearing snarling in anger. White foam dripped from her fangs and her eyes pierced the night with there darkness. She let a long warning growl pass her lips as she looked up at the ugly creature. It was a grizzly, and it was attacking Kirany. She pulled back her lips and charged forwards.




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Kirany jumped at the bear's side but it hit her and threw her to the ground. Fadaila got on the bear's back and bit it's neck causing it to run away.



Firearris
[Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard appears "We have weasels now!"
[Firearris] 10:45 pm: askes the guard for the weasel!
[Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard gives Firearris the Weasel.
[Firearris] 10:46 pm: aquires the weasel and renames it "Cat"

Take that, Lumi.




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<<Er that was god moding...Please don't say what the other peoples characters are doing.>>




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*anybody else got more ideas for plots, if not i suggest a sickness sweeps through the forest killing many, so the packs team up and go in search of a cure* (sry if this sounds stupid im wiped)

Flame, stiffened her hackles rising. She'd gone out to try and catch some food, when the bear came crashing through the woods. She danced aside as the bear, ran past. He kept wrecking a path through the forest. Turning back the way the bear had come she saw Fadalia and another wolf off in the distance.
DANCE- Like no-one is watching
LOVE- Like you've never been hurt
SING- Like no-one is listening
LIVE- Like it's heaven on earth.

Please read and review my novel. The title is Fireborn. Here's the link.

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<<I am so sorry, I thought we were s'possed to control other people's characters and control the story, but we had to make them act like the character....very sorry.>>>



Firearris
[Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard appears "We have weasels now!"
[Firearris] 10:45 pm: askes the guard for the weasel!
[Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard gives Firearris the Weasel.
[Firearris] 10:46 pm: aquires the weasel and renames it "Cat"

Take that, Lumi.




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<<I dunno, full moon seems a bit un-origonal :D Maybe their patrols meet on the border every so often or something. I like the idea of a disease, but why would the go in search of a cure? Maybe the packs can communicate through howling.>>

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Blood Mountain

Tallulah raced through the undergrowth, Trying to get back to camp. What had happened? The pups frantic kiy-iing Hadn't stopped, and it sounded like whoever was making in was in trouble. Skittering around a boulder, Tallulah stretched out her powerful shoulders. The camp was almost in sight now. There were more sounds too, the barking of nurses and other adults. Crashing through the border, Tallulah saw the cause of the sounds.




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Destiny stared in horror as the huge wolverine carried off two dead pups. She swore it was three sizes larger than a normal wolverine should have been. She got to her feet and winced as the gash on her hind-quarter bled profusely. She followed the wolverine determined to at least get the pups' bodies back. As she rounded the nurses den she saw the wolverine. Destiny took a cautious pawstep and snapped a twig. The wolverine pricked it's ears and slowly turned. Destiny couldn't help growling. The wolvering launched itself at Destiny. Destiny quickly moved to the side. The wolverine snapped at her and launched itself at her again, but this time it pinned her to the ground. Destiny heard her shoulder crack and let out cry of pain. She snapped at the wolverine's neck but missed.

>>All I got.<<
A room without books is as a body without a soul.
---Cicero

Merry Christmas Yall!!




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<<I like the disease idea! Full moon it is =]>>




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Kirany got up, but it hurt to stand. She sat sat back down and looked up at Fadaila, who was watching the bear charge away.
[Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard appears "We have weasels now!"
[Firearris] 10:45 pm: askes the guard for the weasel!
[Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard gives Firearris the Weasel.
[Firearris] 10:46 pm: aquires the weasel and renames it "Cat"

Take that, Lumi.




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"Are you hurt?" Fadalia wined anxiously. She sniffed Kiranys leg and recoiled, "Ew. Thats nasty lets get you back to the den" She growled before lifting Kirany onto her back and slowly walking back to the den




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When they returned, Fadaila left Kirany in Kirany's den. Kirany sat there thinking.

Even after I attacked her...she risked her life to help me. Maybe I should repay her... She thought. She stood up and looked around, then she left her den.
[Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard appears "We have weasels now!"
[Firearris] 10:45 pm: askes the guard for the weasel!
[Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard gives Firearris the Weasel.
[Firearris] 10:46 pm: aquires the weasel and renames it "Cat"

Take that, Lumi.



That's just what translation is, I think. That's all speaking is. Listening to the other and trying to see past your own biases to glimpse what they're trying to say. Showing yourself to the world, and hoping someone else understands.
— Ramy (Babel by R. F. Kuang)