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Destiny
Blood Mountain

Destiny watched from afar as the hunting group ate their own fill, tearing and shredding the moose meat. All she could hear was the threatning growls of each wolf as they ate.

"Why aren't you eating?" She heard a younger male wolf ask.

"I'm not hungry, and besides we need to save some for the others." Destiny told him.

"I guess you're right." He said as he took off for the moose. Destiny walked up to the moose and tore a leg off with one pull.

"Are you going to eat all that?" She heard a older wolf ask with a mouthful of meat. "No." Destiny told him blandly as she walked off towards the den.
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Serra finished eating and moved towards the den. There was an older wolf trying to take another wolf's share. She was a smaller wolf, younger too.
"Leave her alone." She growled at teh older wolf. "You ate enough."
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<<Yay! Now there's three of us. Welcome to blood mountain Destiny!>>
Tallulah
Blood Mountain

Tallulah lay in the shade, belly bulging with the food she had eaten. Like this she could go on for over a week, making sure her pack was strong. She followed the yearlings and the new pup's progress lazily, keeping her muzzle resting on the ground.

A two year-old began to pester a yearling for her mouthfull of meat. She stood her ground, holding the piece of food tightly in her jaws. He swallowed what he was eating, and growled threatenteingly.

Suddenly, Serra trotted up, but instead of going past them into the den, she stopped, and cocked her head. Interested, Tallulah lifted her head and pricked her ears. Serra then took two steps forward, and said something to the bigger wolf. Reacting to her approach, he turned and sniffed the air. Recognizing the half-ling by sent, he snarled with rage and leaping on top of her. Tallulah leaped up and started to run over. A fight between two of her warriors could be serious, trained as they all were to fight. But even before she got there, it was over.




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Destiny
Blood Mountain

Destiny walked over to the nurses and dropped the large moose leg in front of them. Each of them crept towards the leg and began eating. Destiny turned around and walked towards the entrance of the camp. Ducking under the low branches she made her way towards a very thin stream that she secretively knew of. It was about two-hundred meters away from camp this was a place she could be alone and a place where she could think.

As she got closer to it she could hear the slow current. 'I bet I am going to be punished if I keep this place a secret any longer.' She thought to herself.

Once she reached the stream she layed down right by the edge, wondering what really happened to her family and who, what, or where her only sibling was.




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Leona
Red Oak

I brought up the rear as Faladia led this injured wolf back to our cave.

She's always confusing me, but there's nothing I can do about it. She's the Alpha; I'm just second in command...

*Sorry, writer's block...
"Neglect not the gift that is in thee, which was given thee by prophecy, with the laying on of the hands of the presbytery." Timothy 4:14 KJV




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Serra rolled to the side as the bigger wolf jumped on her. She jumped back towards him shoving him to the ground. She stood over him growling. He had eaten to much and had gotten slow. She had also eaten her fill, but had learned how to fight while full. She snarled in his face. "I don't suggest you do that again." She hissed,

"Your a half-bred I outta kill you for this." He snarled back.

"That is mighty stupid thing to say when I could kill you easily right now." She growled back.

"Stop this now, there is no need to fight." Tallulah snapped walking over. Serra slowly backed away from the other wolf a snarl still formed on her snout.
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Destiny
Blood Mountain

After a while Destiny trotted back to camp. She just had to tell Talluhlah about the stream. For her pack, she would reveal the only place that was hers.

As she entered camp she saw Serra, Tobi :?: , and Telluhlah all talking. Each of them had thier shackles raised. 'I tell her tomorrow.' She thought quietly to herself.

Destiny slowly walked to a bed of moss and grass in the corner of the camp and plopped herself down for a well-earned nap.




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<<Sorry I haven't written in a while but I am kinda stuck. I think I can get around it though.
Please no more Blood Mountain wolves. We need some more Red Oak. So. until we have an equal amount of each.
We also need to start thinking of a plot. My thoughts where A bone Chilling ice age. Or a battle against the humans. And both packs must join together to fight against them. Yay or nah? Or if you have any other ideas or suggestions please post them :D>>

Once they reached the den Fadalia lay Flame in her den.
"Rest. I will be back soon with some herbs to help south your wound." She whispered coldly to the wolf. She still was not very pleased with Flames actions.
She turned "Leona would you mind getting some meat and water for her please?"
"I am assuming you know what to do with the water? Just soak some moss in the stream. And she can lick the water from there." She finished.
"Don't worry about the meat. I will get Astrid and go hunting. Unless we have some elk left over from last night."
With that she trotted out of the den and into the forest.
She held her nose high scenting the air for herbs or game. Nothing came to her so she continued onwards.
A few short minutes later she came to a small cliff. She climbed this and once she came to the top she threw back her beautiful muzzle and let an elegant song pass her lips. It was a hunting song for her friend Astrid. She was calling her to come and hunt.
After repeating this once more she dropped her head. Her ears swivelled forwards and her tail was raised in joy as the echoing song of Astrid answered that she was coming.
Fadalia smiled inside and wagged her tail happily before setting back down the cliff.




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*I got a plot idea, how about there's a forest fire, so the two wolf packs have to band together and find a new home, only things keep getting in the way, natural disasters, humans, atc... What do you guys think*

Flame was nervous, she couldn't help it the only wolves she'd ever been around were her parents and siblings and they'd died ages ago. And she just couldn't shake the feeling that something bad was coming to the mountain/valley. It was driving her nuts, just waiting, and waiting, and waiting...

Sighing Flame licked her injured leg, she wished her sister was still alive.
DANCE- Like no-one is watching
LOVE- Like you've never been hurt
SING- Like no-one is listening
LIVE- Like it's heaven on earth.

Please read and review my novel. The title is Fireborn. Here's the link.

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<<Thats perfect! Two more ideas and I will make a poll!>>
<<Oh and maybe Fadalia and Flame should have some relation. Lost sisters etc. It would be cool as part of the plot :D>>

Seconds later a the black tipped muzzle of Astrid could be seen trotting up the cliff to meat her Alphes.
Once she reached the top she dipped her head in greeting, "Greetings, Fadalia." She barked.
"Astrid. I am glad you have come. We need to hunt. We have to prey for the pack, and there is an injured one back at the den." Fadalia explained calmly.
"Okay. You take the lead Fadalia." Astrid replied.
Then the two wolves set off into the trees.




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Sorry I'm really late huh??

Name: Delilah

Gender: Female

Pack: Red Oak Wolf Pack

Rank: Female

Age: 1 Year

History: Her father was from Blood Mountain and her mother was from Red Oak so she is has the traits from each side. She had one sibling, but she can't remember what he or she looked like, and she doesn't know if he or she is dead or not.

Description: Her and her sister were both raised in Blood Mountain with their father. Later on when she was about two months old she left camp on accident and fell down the rocky mountain. Everyone in Blood Mountain thought she was dead except her sister, Destiny. The Red Oak wolves took her in almost at once when they found her because she was so young. Pic shows more.

Attitude: She is exactly like her sister, Destiny. Looks & Attitude

Mate: don't have one yet

Pups: None yet

Picture: http://s240.photobucket.com/albums/ff44 ... =red-1.jpg




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Delilah walked past Fadalia's den and peered in curiously. A mysterious scent stuck in her nose. It was a mix between Blood Mountain and Red Oak. 'Just like me...' she thought to herself.

"What are you doing she heard a pup ask from behind her. Delilah whipped around, startled.

"Nothing." She replied sadly. Delilah walked away from the den, still feeling the pup's curious stare following her.

Delilah trotted to the opening of the camp and walked out. The second she emerged she lifted her muzzle up to scent the air. An mixture up scents rose up her nose. 'Bird to the east, rabbit to the north, and the large, beautiful stream to the west.' she thought quietly. Delilah decided to head to the north to catch some rabbit.

After a little while she finally reached the rabbit holes. A movement of brown to her right caught her eye. She slowly crept up on it. One soft pawstep after another. Delilah was now two to three feet away from the rabbit. 'One...two...three.' she thought as she attacked the rabbit.

The light brown rabbit twisted and turned underneath her paws trying to free itself. Then, with one quick bite to the neck it stopped. Delilah grabbed the kill in her jaws and ran back to camp.




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<< No more Blood Mountain and Red Oak mixes! Everyone is doing this! XD
I can't post now my little sister is right next to me and I can't concentrate at all. Sorry I will post later on tonight.
Any more ideas for the plot?




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Name: Kirany
Gender: Female
Pack: Red oak
Rank: None…just a normal female.
Age: 2 years
Description: White coat, almost yellow and black eyes.
Attitude: Kind but strong.
Mate: Looking
Pups: none.
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[Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard appears "We have weasels now!"
[Firearris] 10:45 pm: askes the guard for the weasel!
[Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard gives Firearris the Weasel.
[Firearris] 10:46 pm: aquires the weasel and renames it "Cat"

Take that, Lumi.




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Here is an idea for a plot:

When they are short of food to hunt, they go looking for better territory but run into the bloody mount pack, who are looking for the same thing: territory for better hunting.
[Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard appears "We have weasels now!"
[Firearris] 10:45 pm: askes the guard for the weasel!
[Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard gives Firearris the Weasel.
[Firearris] 10:46 pm: aquires the weasel and renames it "Cat"

Take that, Lumi.



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