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Have you read The Sight? Or the Warriors series? Well this is like those books except all about wolves.
Please follow the rules and try to be literate.

There are two packs:

Before you post your message please specify what pack you are writing for each time!

Red Oak Wolf Pack
-Live in the Oak Forest.
-Are generally smaller.
-Hunt Rabbit and squirrel.
-Are not very good at fighting.
-Are very good sprinters.
-Can swim.
-Are peaceful and gentle wolves.

Blood Mountain Wolf Pack
-Live in the Blood Mountains.
-Very big and powerful.
-Hunt grizzly bear and other large mammals.
-Fighting is there skill.
-Are generally slower and not very good at running.
-Can swim.
-Are vicious blood thirsty killers.

Please no sexual scenes and if your character has puppies with another wolf (You must ask the other wolf before you go off mating with them) please just don't tell the mating scene.

Ranks
Please ask before you chose to become a higher ranking wolf.
Alpha Male: (Male leader)
Alpha Female: (Female Leader)
Beta Male: (Second in command male)
Beta Female: (Second in command female)
Healer: (Doctor)
Males: (Boys)
Females:(Girls)
Pups: (Kids)
Nurses: (Mothers)

Profiles
Please fill this out so that we know what your wolf is like.
Attention!
You may only have one character plus pups.

Name:
Gender:
Pack:
Rank:
Age:
Description:
Attitude:
Mate: (Optional)
Pups: (Optional)
Picture:

The Territory
(Description coming soon)
Image
We will figure out the boarders and meeting places together in the RPGing.

Plot
(We need a plot please PM me with your ideas. And we shall have a vote on the best ones.)

Gwenevire
This is my profile
Name: Fadalia
Gender: Female
Pack: Red Oak Wolf Pack
Rank: Alpha Female
Age: 2 years
Description: A larger and powerful long legged fea with beautiful red fur and oak brown eyes. She has lean built muscles and a strong jaw. She has good vision and hearing.
(More coming soon)
Attitude: An ambitious fea with a fiery temper. She will risk her life for her pack. She is daring and curious yet she has a good instincts and knows when to turn back. Yet, he curiosity seems to always overwhelm her.
Past: Fadalia was brought up by her mother Moonlight and was the her only pup. She lived a happy life and grew into a strong Alphes. But little did she know that her father was a Dire wolf. (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dire_wolf)
Mate: (Looking)
Pups: (Not yet)
Picture: Image
Last edited by Gwenevire on Mon Dec 10, 2007 10:47 pm, edited 8 times in total.




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Name: Serra
Gender: Female
Pack: Blood Mountain Wolf Pack
Rank: none
Age: 2
Description: She is part both wolf, Picture shows all
Attitude: She is catious, because sense she is a half breed persay no one seems to like her so she is trying to prove herself to the Blood Pack
Mate: Looking
Pups: Looking
Picture:
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t168 ... s/Wolf.png
Last edited by TNCowgirl on Fri Dec 07, 2007 3:07 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Name: Leona
Gender: female
Pack: Red Oak Wolf Pack
Rank: Beta Female
Age: 3 years
Description: is long legged, but has some muscle in quarters
Attitude: very calm, but can be aggressive if the need arises; is not an excellent fighter, but she will protect her pack
Mate: looking
Pups: looking
Picture: (will post later)
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ooh! cool story book. Its just like the other one though. (Layleun)

Heres mine:

Name:Tallulah

Pack: Blood Mountain

Rank: Alpha female?

Age: four years

Mate: dead

Pups: Can I be one of my pups two?

Personality/description: I will post a picture later. Light gray coloring, gold eyes and a sprinkling of black hairs on face. Slightly jumpy personality, is a very fast runner. (Ok If she is? I know you said that they are generally slower, but maybe her parents were from the other pack) and is very protective of younger/smaller animals.

[EDIT] By the way, in the wild, only the alpha male & female would have pups. the pack would be made up of their old litters, plus maybe an omega. I'm confused.....




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heres mine


name:bruce brutal

gender:male

pack:oak forest

rank:pup

age:6 months

mates:none

pups:none
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<<Thank you all for joining! :D When should we start? Canislupis maybe you should start off as the beta...>>




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Ok, I guess.... Who's the alpha then?




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<<Fine you can be alpha female.
Now lets start.>>




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*Can I make one suggestion before we start? It would help save a lot of confusion with the posts, since we are having two different storylines going at the same time.
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*When you post, start off by stating what pack you're writing for. The other wolf-related storybook is a hot mess because people are not specifying what pack they're writing for.
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<<Thats a good idea! Okay I will post that up there right away! Then we can start>>




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Fadalia passed restlessly back and forth across the side of the rushing river bank. Her eyes seemed locked on the mossy forest floor and her tail hung low down behind her. She was worried yet for nothing at all. "Its just your instincts kicking in..." she mumbled to herself "Nothing els". She continued down the river bank until she came to a fork in the water. She leaped over the shallow bit and kept walking

<<Sorry for the little description and effort I am really sleepy.>>




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*is this ok?*

name- Flame
gender- female
pack- neither, she's a lone wolf, for now.
rank- none, or alpha of a pack of one.
age- 1 year, so she's like half-grown

history- her mother was a Red Oak wolf, and her father was a Blood mountain wolf. They died along with her siblings, in winter, when she was just a pup. By all rights she should be dead. Because her parents come from both packs she ended up with the best, and worst, traits of both packs.

description- Built like a Red Oak wolf, but slightly larger then them, is a good fighter, but can run too, but prefers not to, is extremely viscious when provoked. Has a night black coat with flame red tips on her ears, nose, tail, and paws. Her eyes are blue. Has an x-shaped scar on her left foreleg.

attitude- When she was a pup she had a sunny personality, but after her family's death, she became distrustfull, and avoids other wolves. In short, a hermit. Hot headed, reckless, and stubborn. Once you earn her trust she is eternally loyal. Basically she has an alpha's personality.

mate/pups- none
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(Red Oak)

Flame opened her eyes lazily, and stretched, she'd been sleeping beneath the branches of a willow tree, the stream bubbled nearby. Standing she lifted her muzzle, scenting the wind. Flame curled her lips in a snarl, there were other wolves in the nearby.

It was probably just another Red Oak patrol, they knew they had an intruder on their territory. But they couldn't track her well, since she smelled like both Blood Mountaion AND Red Oak.

She shrugged, flicking her tail, Flame turned to lope off down stream, and froze. Flame was staring right at another wolf a female, that looked about a year older then her.

Snariling she crouched down low to the ground, hackles raised, she could fight or run at any second. "Who are you?"




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Leona
Red Oak

I stepped from the brush behind this new wolf, not a sound coming from me. Not a snarl, a growl, or a whine.

"Are you sure you want to display aggression?" I asked, keeping my tone low and soft.

This intruder - who smelt of neither Red Oak or Blood Mountain - turned at my approach; she was already outnumbered.
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