The Random Vampire Story [1]

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James-

"What are you doing with the girl, Caiden?" i demanded, my voice a low hiss. My body was tense in case this vampire decided to attack. When it came to vampires, i had to be wary. Be wary or be dead.

I had come to trust Bella, almost. I knew she meant me no harm intentionally, but vampires could be unpredictable, that i learned. I unconsciously rubbed the scar on the forearm from a vampires fangs.
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Caiden slipped out the oppsite door and leaned against it straining to hear what they were saying.

"What are you doing with the girl, Caiden?" James demanded.

"I like her," Colt said simply.

She heard James scoff, "like the taste of her more like it."

"Its not like that-"

"Face it," the girl said, "she smells just as good as James does, and we know she's not a witch."

"She could still kick my ass if I threatened her."

Caiden couldn't stand it anymore. She stood up and walked over to them, "He is right you know, I am a vampire hunter, with a little bit of witch blood in me."

"What about the werewolves?" James demanded, "they didn't just show up randomly!"

"They ovbiously sensed a surge of vampires in the area, I think a vampire warlord or something is making them to see if we can keep up. Or if at least I can."
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My wrist healed only seconds after I had drunk my fill. I had seen the way James cringed when I drank, noticed the scars on his arm. I didn't ask--I was fairly sure he didn't trust me quite that much yet.

"Why you?" I asked, trying to take of the edge we all had to our voices. The velvet tone of my voice had a bit of an effect, and everyone calmed slightly. James heart was beating faster again, and I could smell his blood strong...it was driving me insane.

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"They smelled vampire, that is what they came for. I don't know why they were in our area. Caiden could be right, but I don't know what the werewolves would listen to a vampire." Colt said looking at the two new people. He could smell the vampire on the girl, but James was humen.
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James-

I sighed. "Well, what now, since we're here?" i asked, looking around.

Where were we?

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"It would help if we knew where here was," I commented. "ALong with exactly what our situation is..." James hesitantly moved closer to me. I reached out and took his arm lighlty, pulling it toward my face. He flinched, tried to pull back.

"Don't worry," I whispered. "I won't hurt you." He stop struggling, but still seemed worried. I brought his wrist up to my nose and inhaled deeply. Damn he smelled sweet.

He was watching me, his eyes full of fear, and nothing more. I kissed his wrist lightly, right where the veins were, then let him go.

"I can control it, I promise." He didn't look like he believed me.
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James-

I coughed and inched away from Bella and the rest of them, not really trusting two vampires. I glanced around nervously.

"So what now?" i asked again.
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Colt sniffed the air, "now we run."

"Run?" Caiden said stiffening a little next to him.

"They're getting closer," the girl said, "I'm Bella by the way," she said, probably as a passing thought.

"Come on," Colt turned Caiden around and they hurried off to the car, Caiden stumbeling in the darkness.
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Colt froze a few feet away from the car. There were two werewolves sniffing around the car. He spun around quickly and took off in a dead run grabbing Caiden and carrying her. SHe hadn't been able to react as quickly and he let her down as soon as they were a good distance away. Bella and James had caught up. Colt could hear the werewolves following, but he didn't stop. He made sure Caiden stayed close to him as they ran. He didn't know where they were or what they were going to do but he had to get them out of there and fast.
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Caiden ran as fast as she could, Colt seemed intent on making sure she did. But it was getting harder, she never was one for running, and in all honesty she always kept her car handy when she was vampire hunting.

Soon her breathing became too eratic for her to continue and she had to stop.

"Come on Caiden," Colt said and started to drag her.

"I can't," she panted, "I need to catch my breath."
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Colt looked behind them, the werewolves were closing in. He picked her up before she could protest and continued. They started through a clearing in the woods and he stopped sort when several werewolves came out of the woods ahead of them and then some behind them. They were soon surronded by them.

"Stay close." He wispered to Caiden setting her down. He watched as a big werewolf stepped in front of them, still in his humen form. "What do you want?" He demandedd.
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"The humans to be set free." it said simply.

"They are not being held captive," Bella replied.

"She is right," Caiden said stepping out from behind Colt.

The werewolf came right up to her and sniffed her shoulder, "you're part vampire."

"I'm a vampire hunter."

"Then why haven't you slain them?"

"I like them."

"Then you are just as bad as they, and you shall all die."
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James-

"Wait," i said, stepping forward. I had a spell close to mind, just in case.

"Who are you?" the werewolf asked, sniffing the air around me.

"My name is James. I am a wizard. These," i gestured around me to the other three. "Are my friends."

"You trust them? A vampire slayer, and two vampires?"

"Yes, i do. They have yet to cause me harm, and i do not think they intend me any at all."

"How can you be sure? You are human."

"Yes, i am human, but i am also a wizard, you forget."

"Nevertheless, you are still hanging out with these people, and thus you must die."
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"You'll lose more of your group then four if you try and kill us." Colt hissed, "If you don't remember right vampires can kill you faster then you can kill us, we are stronger."

"Ha, but there are more of us." The leader hissed back.
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Colt jerked Caiden back just as a werewolf lunged at them, switching into their wolf form and tackling Caiden to the ground as another got after colt.

Caiden's mind was frantic, she pushed against him and kicking until she remembered about her dagger. She pushed as hard as she could and gave the creature a head butt to the face.

IT rolled away dragging its claw against Colt's jacket and breaking through the skin, she cried out but grabbed her dagger out of her boot and rammed it into the cratures gut. Colt's arm wrapped around her waist just above where the werewolf had cut her and dragged her along with him.
I just lost the game.



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