The Random Vampire Story [1]

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Colt felt Caiden move, she was awake. He didn't take his eyes off the three though. He slowly started to move backwards.

"Don't you go anywhere!!" One snapped, "IF you aren't going to share then your gonna have to fight." Colt stiffened, he looked the three over, this wasn't going to be easy. He slowly set Caiden down and and stood in front of her. The three smiled and slowly stared walking towards him. Colt squared his shoulder and ran at them. He rammed into two of them with his shoulders sending them flying backwards. He slammed his fists into the other while the others tried to get up. He spun around and pounded his fists into the vampire's face. He stumbled back and Colt moved forward. He turned to the other two. They just stayed still,

"Don't even think about following me." He hissed walking back over to Caiden, he picked her up and kept walking.
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Caiden felt herself get put down and then sometime later being picked up again. She felt so dizzy that she almost retched, but she resisted. Colt had probably saved her life twice in a half hour peroid and she didn't think that her puking on him would be much of a thanks.

Slowly, she lost all conciousess again
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Colt finally reached the town, but Caiden was already unconscious. He decided to take her back to his place and take care of her there. He wouldn't want any questions asked and she needed to be taken care of as soon as possible and his house was the closest place. He quickly sprinted up to his apartment. There were three rooms, a nice kitchen, living room and dinning room. He took her into the guest room and laid her on the bed and then quickly ran next door. His neighbor was also a life long friend who knew he was a vampire. He knocked on the door hurriedly and waited for Brent to open the door.

"Dude, I was studying, just cause you don't have to doesn't mean you should interrupt me." Brent hissed.

"I need your help!" Colt said hurridly,

"What did you do?" Brent demanded following him to Colt's apartment and into the guest room.

"We got in a car wreck, I can't help her she is bleeding to much." Colt said,

"Don't breath then, I'm not a doctor." Brent insisted.

"Just stay here, hit me over the head if the smell gets to me, PLEASE!" Colt asked,

"Fine, let me go get my books." Brent came back a few minutes later as Colt got warm water on some wash clothes and started cleaning off the cut. "What if she looses to much blood. You should have taken her to the hospital."

"They wouldn't have done her any good. She wont," Colt said hurridly, by the time he would have gotten to the hospital she would've bleed out. He had been able to stop the bleeding quickly by himself.
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Caiden felt something warm and soft on her forehead, but it was soon followed by a stinging feeling unlike anything she's ever felt before. She was able to break through the blackness in her head and open her eyes. She regretted it immeaditly. If she thought the stinging was bad before it was excruciating now.

She screamed and withered, she wanted the blackness to come again, but she knew it wouldn't. Every nerve fiber felt like it was exploding.

The only thing she could make out through the pain was Colt's face leaning over her.

What was going on?
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Colt flinched as Caiden screamed,

"Dude, what did you do?" Brent demanded,

"Just cleaned the cut off with some piroxide." Colt replied, he put the warm cloth back on the cut and walked to the doorway. Caiden's eyes were full of pain, and if he was allowing himself to breath she would probably smell like it too. "If she says anything call me. I'm gonna go make something to drink."
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Caidens breathing slowly returned to normal as the stinging and burning stopped. She didn't know where she was and didn't really care. She rolled onto her side and fell back asleep, even though she knew she souldn't.
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Colt walked back into the room sipping on coffee. She had rolled over and was fast asleep. He leaned against the wall and just watched her sleeping. She acctually looked harmless as she slept. He smiled to himself, she would kill him for this.

"How do you know someone human?" Brent asked suddenly.

"I know you." he said flatly, 'She really is beautiful.' He thought to himself quickly scorning himself for the thought.
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*I can't think of a way to wake her up, could you help mabel?*
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Caiden slept for a day, Brent had long sense gone back home to get some sleep, but Colt didn't get much. He stood out on the balcony thinking. The town wasn't huge, but it wasn't small. His apartment faced the other way and he could see the woods beyond that. He could see her wrecked car that had been moved by a friend of Brent's. They had repaired the dents and it was parked in the garage now.

"Better wake her up." He sighed walking into the apartment and to the spare room. Caiden was still asleep and he didn't want to disturb her, but if she was missing for any longer her witch friend would come looking for her and he would be toast.

"It's time to get up sleepy head." He called shaking her shoulder. He hoped she wouldn't jump up at him, but if she did she didn't have anything long or pointed and he would be able to restrain her if he needed to.
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Caiden slowly opened her eyes, where was she? She looked up and saw a vampire hovering over her, she couldn't quite make out his face but it was a vampire and thats all she needed to know. "Get away!" she said and inched away from him.

Surprisingly he backed off right away. "Caiden its alright, its Colt."

Caiden squinted in the darkness, and she could see him and she relaxed. "Sorry about that-"

"Knee jerk reaction I know."

"What time is it?"

"About midnight, two days after the accident."

Her eyes widened in horror, "Slade's going to be out of his skull, I'd better get home."
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James-

I walked beside Bella, still puzzled about what she had just done. Which was the whole thing... i didn't know what she had done. But i had a feeling i was about to find out.

"So, what do you like to do in your spare time? Do you sing or play sports?" i asked casually.
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"I like singing, but I don't actually sing as like a hobby or something. I got sucked into cheerleading somehow, but it's not a passion or anything. I really like poetry though. What about you, what do you do for fun?" I asked, watching James closely.
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James-

I shrugged. "I don't know. Lots of things. Nothing. All depends on the day. Usually I practice my magic."

I watched her reaction carefully.
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I kept my expression even. I knew there was something special about his blood.

"Magic?" I question. "So you must be a warlock?"

"That is correct. And you must be a vampire?"

"How can you tell?" I smirked, amusment clear in my voice.

"You can smell my blood," he said. I inhaled deeply.

"Yes, I can," I agreed.
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Colt watched her leave and he leaned up against the door frame and chewed on the inside of his lip. He walked slowly around his apartment aimlessly. He finnally grabbed his jacket and walked towards Caiden's apartment. He walked back and forth infront of her door. 'Why the heck did you follow her?' A voice demanded in his head. He knocked on the door and waited. 'Slade could be here you idiot!' As if on que Slade opened the door. He glared at Colt and then out of no where jumped towards him. Colt was caught off gaurd a little and barely got out of the way but Slade was fast, his fist collided with Colt's jaw and Colt stumbled backwards. He dind't want to hit one of Caiden's friends but he was asking for it. He went to grab Slade by the neck and stop him when his arm froze in then air. He tried to move it but he couldn't. 'Stupid majic.'
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