The Random Vampire Story [1]

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Colt carried Caiden away from the werewolves and set her up in a tree killing a werewolf on the way. He turned around and ran back to the group pouncing on the leader. He was about to snap it's kneck when another werewolf jumped on him. He rolled to the side falling ontop of the werewolf. It yelped in pain and he jammed his elbow into it's stomach breaking several ribs. He jumped up as the leader came at him. It snapped at his midsection and he rammed his fists into it's head. He grabbed it's muzzle and yanked it's head to the side snapping it's kneck. He careful looked around looking at every werewolf that was still alive. They slowly backed up and took off.

"Where are they going?" James demanded.

"Their leader is dead, they will stop fighting until they find a new leader. That will take a few days to do so so we better get out of here." He said walking quickly to where Caiden was. He stopped breathing so that he wouldnt' smell her scent.
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Bella~

I got up slowly, cringing in pain. A werewolf had been on top of my, about to rip out my throat, when Colt finally managed to kill the leader. How could I have been so weak? I snapped at myself, examining my wounds. They would heal quickly.

"Are you okay?" I asked, looking at James.

"Fine," he answered softly, as if slightly startled (he had every right to be). "You look much worse than I do, by my standards."

"I heal quickly, and shall be fine," I replied, stepping toward him. He still seemed firghtened of me, and it bothered me. "Please don't be afraid of me," I whispered, wanted to feel his warmth surround me. Colt and Caiden were over a ways, out of earshot, talking.
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James-

I opened my mouth to say something back to her, but at that moment i forgot what i was going to say because of a searing pain blossoming on my back. My mind went completely blank as a looked down to the ground and saw a small trickle of blood forming a pool at my feet.

I looked up at Bella again slowly.

"Hold you breath," i mouthed, not having the breath to say the only thing that had sprung to mind before i collapsed and let darkness consume me.
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Caiden climbed down the tree and into Colt's arms. Doing her best to cover the wound on her gut so he didn't have to smell it.

"Are you okay?" he asked.

"It doesn't hurt much," she replied. "Only when I think about it."

"We'd better get out of here," Bella said, "get her some bandages."
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"She isn't the only one that needs bandages." Colt said nodding towards James. "We need to find a safe place and get them fixed up. They werewolves probably trashed our car so we can't get away. Lets find a good hideout and get them fixed up." He said picking Caiden up. He wanted to inhale but he wouldn't let himself.
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"I'm fully capable of walking," Caiden said stubbornly.

Colt smiled, "I know, but its easier this way."

"For who?"

"For both of us."

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**I'm doing a rewind, because Maybe and I had an idea, and then everyone posted. SO this is back after Maybe's last post**

Bella~

I bent down next to James, wanting to make sure he was okay. I was running otu of breath, and needed to breath. I could handle it...I knew I could.

I inhaled.

Oh God he smelled good...too good. I bent down, wanting to bite into him.

"No!" I snapped at myself. Here he was, the first person I had ever really cared about, bleeding at my feet, and I wanted to kill him! Shame!!! I looked at his back, trying to see what was wrong. He looked up at me, still concious, even if just barely.

"Bella..." he began to speak.
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James-

I winced at the pain in the back and felt the warm flow of blood tickled from the wound. I had no idea how bad it was. Unconsciousness was coming agonizingly slow. I willed it faster.

"Bella," i managed to gasp as i watched her bend her head, preparing to bite me. She drew back sharply but didn't react to my word. Perhaps i had spoken it too softly...

"Bella..."

This time her eyes flickered to me and she lowered her head quickly.

"Please don't kill me," i whispered, a faint smile tracing across my lips just as unconsciousness spread over me like a thick, warm blanket. I fell gratefully into darkness.
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Bella~ (still backtracking slightly)

"James..." I watched him slip into unconciousness.

I hated the way he thought I would kill him. I had control...didn't I? I htought I did... perhaps i was wrong... Carefully, I lifted him into my arms.

"Help, please," I said quielty, walking over to Colt and Caiden.
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"Put me down Colt!" Caiden hissed again, Colt did as Bella walked over,

"Help, please." She barely said. Colt took James out of her arms and carried him. He didn't breath in, he didn't need to. They slowly made there way through the woods both of the girls staying close to him as they did. None of them would be able to stand another attack. Colt and Bella had healed up but they wouldn't be able to protect the other two if attacked again.
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As soon as they reached the cave Caiden leaned down against the wall and pressed her hand to her stomach, she didn't want to show it but she was in more pain than she had thought.

She made sure she kept her composure long enough for Colt and Bella to handle Jame's injuries. Even when they were done she was determined not to act like she needed help.

But when her vision started fading going in and out she knew she wouldn't be able to put up much of a fight.
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Bella~

Colt noticed the Caiden was hurt almost immediatly after healing James. He went over to help her, while I sat and waited for James to wake up.

Am I really such a monster that someoen I really care about would fear me? I wondered, watching James sleep. He looked so at peace, unworried. I sat a ways away from him, against the wall. I curled up in a little ball, wishing for oncei n my life that I was normal.

James movement to sit beside me startled me. I quickly wiped away my tears, hoping he wouldn't notice. Although, the way i was crying, more would come before I had even finished wiping them away.
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*Yes, im back, not with the group, i kinda got myself kicked out of that, how, i dont know.*

Its interesting how much a person changes after you save there lives. They get stronger so they wont be in that situation again, but once they think there strong enough that they think they dont need you anymore, you instantly become an annoying hum that sits around them. Slade felt this way, but knew that eventually Caiden would need him again, so he hung around. Apparently, Caiden was too good for him, and kicked him out of his life.

Walking up to her appartment, he knew almost instantly that she was not home.'Probably with those vampires.' he thought sadly, and let himself in. He walked slowly to her room, and found one of her stakes.' Should i end it now. Will it hurt? Maybe for the last few minutes, but then i could be blissfull, and quiet. I would be wanted for once in my life, rather than being kicked out from the rest of the worlds.'
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James-

I opened my eyes, letting them adjust to the light while trying to recall what had happened. I met Bella...we met Colt and Caiden...and then the werewolves attacked...and i collapsed. That was all i could remember.

I struggled to sit up, looking around and wincing as the tender skin around the wound was pulled. I felt along my back and found no mark of the wound but only felt a long, jagged scar.

Looking around, i saw Bella sitting curled up in a ball against the wall. She was wiping tears from her eyes hastily.

"What happened?" i asked weakly.
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Caiden was just about to lose conciousness when her cell phone rang, she pulled it out and answered, "hello?" her voice was strained.

"Caiden?"

"Slade? where are you?"

"Your apartment. Where are you?"

"A cave somewhere in the woods, I-" it soon became too hard to breath and Colt took the phone away from her and smoothed her hair back.

"Slade, we need your help...Can you bring a car?...Caiden needs help...Thanks, there's a GPS in the phone it'll work with yours. Just get here fast okay? She needs help."
I just lost the game.



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