The Random Vampire Story [1]

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"You got hurt," I replied softly, not meeting his gaze. "You were bleeding from your back...we're not sure what happened though..."

"Why are you upset?" he looked really concerned, which just brought more tears. Curse my emotions!

"You...before you...went unconcious...you asked me not to kill you..."
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Slade listened hesitently." No, i wont come. Im tired of being used. The only times that you have ever really wanted me to be around was when you were in a desperate situation, and im just tired of it, figure it out yourself,and dont call back, cause i wont be around. Dont try anything, cause your never going to see me again." he finished his little speech, and shoved the stake in his wrist. He wanted her to here what she had caused, and make her feel sorry.

"Good bye." he whispered as unconciousness took him over.
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James-

Ah, now i remembered.

"Don't worry about that." i said, waving the thought aside. "I was barely conscious when i said it. I hardly even remember it. Probably just instinct. Don't let it get to you. And besides, you didn't, did you? No, so no need to feel bad."
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*Um, did he just kill himself???? and I have nothing*
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*Dont ask me, i was bored, and getting pissed off with this story anyways. So it can go either way.*
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**Sasquash, why are you angry with a storybook?**

Bella~

"But James...the look on your face...and the way you spoke. Do you honestly think I'd kill you?" he sighed, tipping my head up so I was forced to look at him.

"Bella, I shall make this simple. I have trust issues. It's not your fault," he pulled down his shirt collar, making the bite marks on his neck quite visible.

"What happened?"
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*Being known as the annoying hum kinda gets me started, and then i just dissappear, its like im the bad guy. It just gets me angry when im put as the annoying one who bugs the girl he likes, you know?*
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James-

"Long story," i mumbled. My mind was still a little foggy.

"We have plenty of time." Bella pointed out.

"Well, long story short, I was attacked by many different vampires on many different occasions. The first and worst was by a new vampire who attacked me while i was walking one night. It very nearly killed me, leaving me in a dark alley to die. I didn't have the magic to save myself or kill it, and it was all thanks to a old mage that took me in that i'm still alive. He taught me magic."

I pulled up my right sleeve, showed her a few scars there, and then moved to the ones on my neck and one on my chest.

"That is what he did to me, so like i said, it's not your fault i have problems trusting people."
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**Sasquash, tis nothing more than a story**

Bella~

"Fiar enough," I agreed. "But do you think you'll trust me eventually?"

"I think today was a large step," he nodded, pulling me into a hug. "I was bleeding, and unable to protect myself, but you still managed to control your urges. That shows me something." I smiled, kissing him lightly on the cheek. He didn't seem to expect this, and looked down at me.
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James-

I looked down at her and blinked. She blushed.

I smiled and kissed her back lightly on the forehead, laying my hands on the side of her head.

"And this shows another," i muttered.
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*Yes, but when your treated this way in most stories, it gets very annoying.*
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**I don't know what to tell you, Sasquash**

Bella~

I smiled, curling up against James. We were obviously resting here for the night, seeing as Colt and Caiden were already very asleep. James felt nice and warm against me.

"James," I whispered, listening to the steady beating of his heart.

"Yes?" he replied softly, his fingers running through my hair.

"I...I...L..." I paused. DId I really want to say this? It could ruin everything... "Nevermind," I murmured. As expected, James didn't just drop it.
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*Connor dear, you weren't kicked out, you were just kinda left behind there.*

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James-

I smiled, already knowing what she was saying but wanted her to admit it.

"You what?"

"Erm...nothing."

"No, what were you going to say?"

"Nothing."

"I promise i won't be mad."

"Really?"

"Yes."

She sighed. "Alright. I..."

**Go ahead and finish, Bella**
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"Guys," Colt said, as he picked Caiden up, she didn't want to be moved, she just wanted to sleep.

"No," Caiden groaned, "I want to sleep."

"Its okay," Colt said, "you can sleep, we'll take care of you." Caiden curled up against his chest and heard him go for the cell phone again. "Listen you ass, if you really love her you'll help us save her life! Its not her asking for help it's me!"

Caiden distinctly heard Slade shouting back at him, stubborn guy, he finally took the hint that she could take care of herself. But at the same time she felt sorry for him. He didn't want to be a neusense, he wanted to help.

Pain shot through through her and she cried out and tried to curl up even more than she already was. "Tell him I'm sorry for yelling at him, he's not annoying, and that he's my best friend."

"You'll be able to tell him when we get back to your apartment," Colt assured.

Caiden shook her head, "I don't think so." She lost conciousness.
I just lost the game.



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