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Once was Dreamer, is now LowKey_Lyesmith.

Everybody is a genius. But if you judge a fish by its ability to climb a tree, it will live its whole life believing that it is stupid.




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(Visitation from the past, would you call it?)
my world isn't only beautiful
it is so far away




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post290083.html#290083 gladis a man and his sunflower
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gadi's The Road Under.

in case some one pries through my stuff...i'd like it if they stayed to more recent works as my previous ones were quite inexperienced and i'm evaluating them myself.
What syllable are you seeking,
Vocalissimus,
In the distances of sleep?
Speak it.
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On Winter's Aging
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It has been more than a week and nobody has even done this.
Okay, SOMEBODY just write a message on here without critiquing me and the cycle would start again.

Please?
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The heart of the heavens

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Great job!

P.S. (I would like a crit on StoweAway please!)
Just write -- the rest of life will follow.

Would love help on this.




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Woo 3B! i'll catch up on stoweaway now

The Immortals #8, my favourite part:

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic25778.html
We are all Sociopaths: The Prologue

Sociopath: So • ci • o • path noun
1. Someone who believes their behaviour is right.
2. Human.




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Audition
Writing Gooder

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The light shines brightest in the darkest places.




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Mother, I Love You.
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:( I am sad.
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The grand in the hotel rings with broken tunes; the guests frown; the concierge winces. But the blue-hatted boy is happy and braver than they.
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