Totally Cliche Action Story!

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I shant be posting until Kathy is awake ^.^ but if i get bored enough tonight i may just do a time lapse and force her awake tonight*
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Alright i'm bored this is dead so i'm doing a time lapse!

When Kathy woke she was in a slightly soft bed, in a white room with Slade holding her hand as if he would never let it go. He was awake, and when their eyes met she sighed happily.

"What happened?" she asked, groaning slightly when she moved.

"You shot yourself," he responded, squeezing her hand slightly.

"Yes I remember that, why aren't I dead? Or a zombie?"

"A friend of one of the doctors saved you, they gave you the cure and stopped the bleeding in your head." He looked at her with heart-break in his eyes, "don't do that again."

"Which part? becoming a zombie or shooting myself?"

"Don't scare me like that again."

"oh," was all she was able to say.
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Marlene leaned against the doorway as the two talked. Clearing her throat, they both looked at her. "Um, is alright if I come in?" she asked.

Kathy nodded, and Marlene suddenly found herself by Kathy's bedside, tears in her eyes.

"How are you feeling?"

OOC: Sorry, am out of town, and will not be able to post back again for a week! maybe...
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Jordan was sitting on his father's desk, waiting for him to speak.

"Will your friend be okay?" he asked.

"Yeah, she'll live. She may have suffered some damage from the bullet in her skull, but we won't know until she's awake." Jordan replied simply. "thank you."

"For what?"

"Doing the right thing."

"She's awake!" Marlene exclaimed, stopping at the door long enough to make sure Jordan heard her. He looked back at his father.

"I best see how she feels," he decided, standing up quietly. The doctor nodded, watching hsi son leave.
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*I cant think of anything right now.....oh, and i wont be able to post again untill friday, unless i get lucky and my dad lets me use his laptop on the trip.*
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*that doesn't qualify as a decent post! think of SOMETHING I refuse to start my other one until i get a decent post out of you*
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***I'm grounded, so don't expect anything from me for a while. SORRY!!!***
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*Thats not fair at all :evil: *

Slade continued to look at Kathy without blinking, trying to get the point across that she had almost literally scared him to death. She started right back, but then burst out laughing.

"Im not one for keeping a straight face."she said, still giggling.

Slade couldnt help it and started to snicker, still trying to keep a straight face.

"Aha!!" yelled Kathy," i knew i could make anyone smile!" she said making Slade laugh harder.
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*I know, but yeah thats me ^.^*

Kathy stopped laughing and pressed her palm to her head, "laughing hurts," she said through giggles, "but I can't seem to stop."

*Your turn again Connor, that was the end of my spark but it was something ^.^
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*That doesnt count as a post, it was like a sentance! Its still your turn untill you think of something better..*
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*but, but, but...Slade needs to like....do something i don't know! Its your turn!*
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*No way, you did the same exact thing to me, you need to put a decent post, its only fair. And start up your story book for petes sake!*
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*not the EXACT same thing, I did a sentence of the story, you just put that you couldn't think of anything =P and who's pete?*
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*It still doesnt count as a post. And im still debating who pete is, it could be anyone!lol*
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*Well i can't think of anything! Bella won't be back til wendsday! And i have no clue when frenchy's gonna post again! So if you got something post! Or we'll jsut have to wait!*
I just lost the game.



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