Totally Cliche Action Story!

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*I dont got SQUAT! lol*
It's ok to be a kid sometimes,

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*we're just screwed then aren't we?*
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*Pretty much, untill Frenchy or Bella comes back! They better post soon.*
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*Maybe we should just think of something to do?*
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Slade sighed as he looked down at Kathy while she slept. She looked so harmlessly beautiful this way.

"She's very pretty isnt she?" said a man in the doorway.

Slade looked in his direction, and out of reaction rather than a thank you he said,"Who the heck are you?"

"Ahh..names..there such wonderful things arent they? So powerfully meaningful, but give away so much about a persons character."

"You still havnt answered my question."

The man looked at Slade, and his eyes darkened.

"Dont push me boy. Be glad i saved your girlfreind. So much for a thank you." said the man, as he began to walk away."the youth these days."
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Kathy groaned and rolled onto her side away from the doors and windows. She tried to go back to sleep but found herself unable to. Grudgingly she sat up and smiled when she saw Slade watching her from the doorway.

"How long have you been standing there?" she asked.

He shrugged, "only five minutes, I was sitting over there," he pointed to a chair not to far from her cot.

She shook her head and sighed, "aren't you hungry?"

"Are you?"

"Kinda."

"I'll get us something."
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Alright I promised Connor some prompts so here they are:

Coming back and having breakfast

Zombie attack and they gotta go right away

You go and get food, and come back and see the doctor harassing Kathy, who when he leaves is in tears but won't say whats going on.

Slade thinking he saw Bill in the cafeteria

Any of those work for ya?
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*Ill follow one, but not all the way. Just half way.*

After going to get the breakfast, Slade headed back to Kathy's room. Just as he got right outside the door however, he could here Kathy's voice coming from it.

"Stop it you pervert! Get out of here!" she yelled trying to slap the docter. He was obviously drunk, i mean, it was only the day after new years eve!(I think)

As Slade saw this, he walked up behing the man, and grabbed the back of his neck. Squezing it as hard as he could, the docter let out a shrill scream and dropped to the ground, unconcious.
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Kathy backed up against a wall and slid down, her arms crossed over her chest and started crying.

"What'd he do?" Slade asked kneeling down next to her.

She didn't want to say, but she looked at him with eyes that she hoped told the story.
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Marlene turned the corner, her cheeks flushed and eyes wide. She nearly screamed when someone almost collided into her. The guy grabbed at her arms, holding her steady.

"Oh, there you are," she said, stepping away from Jordan and clearning her throat. "I've been looking for you guys everywhere. Where's Kathy and Slade?"

Jordan shrugged, tucking his hands into his pockets. "Not sure."

"Well, it doesn't matter right now," Marlene looked around to see if anyone was in the hallway, which was surprisingly empty. "Come on, there's something I want to show you."

Marlene grabbed at his arm and practically drug him into a small room. She closed the door behind her and motioned for him to come to the couch.

"So, I've been watching the news channel, right?" she said while messing with the remote. "Turns out this whole virus thing's spreading fast. Canada's got their entire army at the border now, trying to keep it out, but I have a feeling that's not working out too well."

Jordan looked down for a moment, his forehead creased in thought. "So, what are we going to do?"

"I think we should find Kathy and Slade and get out of here. This place is great and everything, but...."

"I know what you mean," Jordan said. "Let's go."


OOC: Sorry it took so long to reply guys. Though your arguing really made me laugh. Hope this is okay? I'm trying to move the plot along and bring the zombies back. 'Gotta love those zombies. ;)
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*TIME LAPSE!! i couldnt think of anything. Okay, so Kathy is pretty much all better, and were getting our stuff together to get going, and away from the zombies.*

"Okay, are we pretty much ready to go?" asked Slade, getting impetiant and twitchy. He does that when he gets nervous.

"Yeah, lets get to the car!"yelled Kathy, obviously enjoying Slades discomfort, thinking it was funny. She smiled at him and giggled.

"What?"said Slade, raising his eyebrow.

"Oh nothing, i just think you look cute when your nervous." she said, fiddling with her sweater.

They all got out to the car, Jordan and Marlene up front, Kathy and Slade in back. Slade laid back in the seat, and Kathy leaned up against him.

"Hmm...your warm." she said, cuddling closer to him.
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Slade wrapped his arms around her, it was so cozy. Strangely for someone who's intire midsection was made of metal. But she didn't care, she loved it. She froze, she had never used the word love before, not even with Bill. She loved him.

OH shit...
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Marlene's head bobbed as the car sped forward. She tried hard to keep her eyes open, but she didn't know how much longer she could fight sleep. It was almost dark outside anyway...

The car stopped all of a sudden, and she looked outside the window. Jordan rolled down the window as a man in a guard's uniform came toward them.

"Yes, sir?" Jordan asked.

"We've closed off the roads," the man said. "You're going to have to go around."

"What's going on?" Slade asked from the backseat.

"I don't know if I should say this, but there's been an outbreak up ahead. The town's pretty small though, so it shouldn't be a problem or anything. The cops are already there.," he told them.

Marlene frowned. "I thought the outbreak hadn't reached Canada yet?"

The man shrugged, before pointing at another road. "If you go around this way, you'll pass the town fine," he said, and then nodded his head, walking away.

Jordan rolled up the window and turned to look at Kathy and Slade. "There's no way they're going to be able to contain it."

Kathy nodded. "That's why we need to work fast."

OOC: foreshadowing, anyone? ;)
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**I"M BACK!!!***

"Work fast? You can't mean..." Marlene began quietly.

"Were not gonna..." Jordan stopped, staring at Kathy.

"Yes we are."

"No! It's too dangerous!" Slade argued immediatly.

"I'm sick of zombies!" Marlene jumped in. Jordan just groaned.

**Sorry, I'm a little short on ideas***
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"Atta girl!" Kathy said, "and she didn't almost become one!"

"Kathy," slade said warningly, he turned her chin to face him, "no, we're not going to rush head first into a town full of zombies and try to kill them all!"

Kathy leaned up and kissed him, "not what i had in mind. More of an assassination style attack."

"A what?" Jordon asked.

"We get on top of a building with lots of long range guns, aim and shoot, whle staying hidden."

"How do you suggest we get up there?"

"Through the doors."
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