Totally Cliche Action Story!

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Slade looked over at Kathy.

"Are you serious?"

"When am i not?"

"Good point." said Slade.

Marlene looked around, confused."I dont get it."

"Were going with Kathy's plan."

"Somehow i thought so."said Marlene.

*Wow, really choppy, thats horrible, but its all i got right now.*
It's ok to be a kid sometimes,

it's what keeps old people young

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Kathy snuggled up closer to Slade, "you're so comfy," she said, then she yawned. She knew she was about to fall asleep, and she used her last waking breath to say, "i love you."

she saw them on top of a building, trying to push a door shut.

"I'm sorry guys," she said, "I'm sorry this happened. Give me your guns."

"Why?" Slade said jamming the door shut with something he had found. "What are we going to do?"

"You three are going to find a way out of here, I'll give you cover."

"No, whereever you go, I go."

"Well I'm not going anywhere, but you are."
I just lost the game.




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Kathy woke up in a fit, screaming hysterically.

"Kathy, what's wrong?" Marlene cried, turning around in her seat. Jordan focused on the road to the best of his capabilities.

"Kathy, are you alright?" Slade asked, running his hand through her hair soothingly.

**Short, I know. I'm sorry*
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Slowly Kathy's breathing returned to normal and she curled even closer to Slade, "nothing, just a bad dream." she said.

"Your dreams always seem to be a great foreshadowing adventure," Slade teased, but turned his voice somber, "tell me about it."

Kathy told them:
She saw them on top of a building, trying to push a door shut.

"I'm sorry guys," she said, "I'm sorry this happened. Give me your guns."

"Why?" Slade said jamming the door shut with something he had found. "What are we going to do?"

"You three are going to find a way out of here, I'll give you cover."

"No, whereever you go, I go."

"Well I'm not going anywhere, but you are."
I just lost the game.




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"Dont think your ever going to get away with that, i wont let you." said Slade.

He was frustrated when this happened, cause half the time it did, her dreams came true. 'Not this time, not this time.'

*Sorry its short.*
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"So are we still going or not?" Jordon asked.

"We're still going of course!" Kathy said.

"No, we're not." Slade said.

"Go Jordan!"

"No!" Slade said again, "we're going somewhere where this infection ISN'T."
I just lost the game.




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(OY! Connor! Frenchy! Bella! Somebody post! Dona let this die!)
I just lost the game.




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"I agree with Slade," Marlene said suddenly. "If they can't beat this, what makes you think we can?"

Kathy ignored her. "Jordan, go. Now."

Jordan turned to look at Marlene, his eyes questioning. She shook her head. "We can't go," she said. "I'm not going."


OOC: Sorry this is so short, trying to take things in a different direction than I was going in before. And sorry this took so long to post! I was wondering where our Storyboard was, since I had posted last, and when I looked at it, it had deleted my post. This is basically what I wrote before.
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return." ^_^




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Ehnah! Connor! You were on and you....you didn't post! :(
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Im here now. :shock: you guys got nowhere since i left.

Slade pulled out a pistol. "Jordan move over." he said, pointing it at him.

"Whoa, no need to get angry, all you needed to do was ask."

Looking at Kathy, Slade knew that she would be pissed at him, and made a split second decession.

"Never mind Jordan, stay at the wheel." said Slade as he climbed from the car.

"Where do you think your going?" said Kathy with a determined look.

"Your going but im staying. Im not going to let your dream come true. Jordan, DRIVE!" he yelled as he saw the zombies heading in there direction.
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Kathy watched out the window as Jordon drove away, no! Kathy grabbed her bag and opened the door, Jordon started to slow down, but Kathy had jumpped out before he got the chance. She threw the bag around her shoulder as she ran to catch up with Slade.

"Kathy!" he yelled, "what are you doing?!"

"Helping you!" she fired a shot at a zombie and hit it square between the eyes. "You've only got ONE pistol you're going to need to re-load eventually."

"Kathy!" he yelled again, "you just got out of the hospital!"

"Yeah so?"
I just lost the game.




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Slade rolled his eyes."Just dont come crying to me when you get a boobo." he said looking at Kathy."Nice shot by the way. How far do you think Jordan and Marlene are going to get?"

"Oh, a few miles at least." said Kathy grinning.

*Sorry its short, but it'll keep us going, right?*
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Kathy laughed and fired off another shot, whenever she carried guns she was usually just supposed to be going after somebody who would either try to shoot her back or run away faster than she could catch them. Shooting people just because they were zombies didn't feel right to her.
I just lost the game.




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Looking into the Zombies eyes, Slade stopped right before he was about to fire a shot.

"Bill?" Slade whispered,"Is that you? It cant be!" he looked over at Kathy who looked thunder struck. As Kathy was looking at the zombified Bill however, another zombie krept up behind her.

"KATHY!!" Slade yelled, shooting in in the eye." I dont have your aiming skills, but im pretty close. Watch yourself! Im not going to chance losing you again, ok?"
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Kathy leaned up and kissed his cheek, "I'll do my best."
I just lost the game.



Everything I’ve ever let go of has claw marks on it.
— David Foster Wallace