The New and Improved Twisted and Completely Out There Story

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Even though Peter sat in the comfortable seat, he was uneasy. How did Odin gain control of him like that? It takes awhile to infect someone, especially a Power.
"Oh it's not hard really." Peter was startled to see Derby sitting next to him.
"How did you-"
"Keep your voice down. We don't want Sara to here. It's not hard for him to take you over. He can get in quickly, especially if the host is...willing."
"You!" Peter whispered with a sharp tone.
"Yes Peter...I am." And before Peter could stiffle a cry he thrust into the wall of the plane.
"HELP! Peter's attacking me!" Derby yelled. Sara lept up. "I knew it!" She lunged at Peter, hurling him to the floor.
"NO! Derby's-" Peter shook with pain, screaming his head off. And as suddenly as it began, it stopped. Peter eye's closed.
"Peter?" Alexx came in from the bathroom.
"He attacked Derby." Peter's eye's shoot open.
"OH MY GOD!" Sara fell backwards. Peter's orginally brown eye's shown red with fire. His pupil's were yellowed and blood shot.
"Guess who's back Greg...me." He pointed to Greg and Derby who also repeated what happened to Peter.
"What the hell is happening?" Screamed Sara.
"The first day of the REIGN OF ODIN!" Screamed Peter as he lept in the jet's side, smashing through. The sudden vacume like state almost sucked out Sara, Owen and Alexx, who, thanks to Owen's quick thinking, held on to the seats. Greg and Derby also through themselves out the hole.
"ODIN KILLED THEM!" Screamed Alexx.
"YOU FORGET THEY CAN FLY!"
Voldemort: You kids! If I ever find out who's calling I will tell the wizard law and you will go to wizard jail and then I'll kill you!

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all rational thought fled Sara, all she saw was her husband fly out of the plane, and before she could come to her senses she threw herself out to get him.

Greg's will power doubled when he saw his wife fling herself out of the plane coming towards him. He pushed Odin out and flew up to catch her.

With her safely in his arms he looked at her sternly, "Sara what were you thinking?"

"If you were going to die, so was I." She looked away from his eyes and saw Derby flying towards the ground, "um... Greg?!"

"Crap, do we have to go get him?"

Sara gave him a cross look, "yes, he's got the resources we need."
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Greg flew towards Derby, Sara clenching to his arm. there was a sudden flash and he was gone.

Greg hovered in mid air. There was no sign of Peter or Derby.

"What the hell was that?" asked Sara.

"I dont know....hopefully i can still catch the jet though." Greg flew off after the Jet. Its altitude had dropped a bit since the door was open.
"Maybe Senpai ate Yuka-tan's last bon-bon?"
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They flew up and borded the plane, shutting the door easily. The piolot was able to bring the ship back up.

Sara kept her arms around Greg as they sat back down, Owen and Alexx already knew what had happened, but why Peter and Derby dissappeared was still a mystery.
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Suddenly a voice could be heard all around them. "I can explain why they are gone."
"Odin..." Greg whispered.
"I have needs for Peter even now. Derby just happened to be in the wrong place at the wrong time."
"I think you should see this." the Pilot entered the room. He flicked a switch, turning on a TV. It was news broadcast from Tokyo. They couldn't understand the reporter but they could understand the fear in her voice. "Peter" was back...and he was mad.
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"Is it just more or does our lives suck," asked Greg, "seriously."

"At least we're already going to Japan," muttered Sara.

The pilot returned to being a pilot and everyone else sat done with a sigh. It looked like it was going to be a long day.
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Sara was dozing off on Greg's chest, when she realized something and laughed, making Greg jump.

"Whats that about?"

"I just realized something," Sara said not giggeling anymore.

"What?" Greg shifted a lock of her hair away from her face.

"If it wasn't for Odin, we wouldn't be here now."

Greg let out a soft chuckle, "well have to kill him nicely then won't we?"
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Alexx paced the length of the plane over and over again, Owen's eyes following her worriedly.

"Hun, I really hate it when you pace like that," he said through clenched teeth.

"What? Oh...um...yeah, sure," she quite obviously had no idea what he was saying.

"Hey Alexx," Sara chimed in, deciding to have a little bit of fun at her friends expense. "There's a monkey on your head."

"That's nice," Alexx replied. Owen shot Sara a dirty look. Greg repressed a giggle.

"Alexx!" she didn't answer this time, and Owen stood up, stepping right in front of her.

"What're you doing?"

"Trying to figure out why my ever-attentive wife is ignoring everyone and everything for the first time in her life!"

"I just...can't believe that that man is my brother. I want my real brother back; the one that isn't hell-bent on taking over the world."
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"To be fair, Odin's the one hell bent on taking over the world," said Greg.

"And he's using my borhter to do it," Alexx retorted.

The flight seemed to drag on and on. Finally they landed at the Misawa Air Force base. Greg spoke to a friend he had there before they set off for Tokyo.
"Maybe Senpai ate Yuka-tan's last bon-bon?"
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As they rode the tension that had them all wound up so tight started to loosen, slightly.

Everything happened at once.

There was a high-pitched almost girly evil laugh. And the car flipped, causing everyone to shoot out, except Sara.

The laughing continued for a few moments but the mayhem stopped. Everything acheived this great sense of calm for about two seconds, just before Greg realized Sara was still in the car.

"Sara!" he screamed and lunged towards the car. He managed to pull the mangled door open and took Sara out. "Sara," he whispered gently, stroking the side of her face. "Sara, honey, can you hear me."

Her eye lids slowly opened. "Greg," she said weakly, each breath hurt. "Greg, I-I love you." And then she was gone.
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"No..." Alexx said quietly, staring down at her best friends still body.

"Shes...dead..." Greg whispered, looking up at Alexx and Owen, tears in his eyes. Alexx's vision began to blur, and she felt her balance becoming less...she fell backwards into Owen's arms.
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"At last! I'm rid of that whore!" Greg and the others looked up to see Hannah floating in the air. Anger took him, replaced the grief.

Greg's eyes started to glow, brilliant golden light pulsed around him, "Death....What right do you have to command it, Hannah? What right do you have to take my Sara!"

He shot off from the ground, deflecting Hannah's feeble attempts at attack. With a sudden boom, Hannah was sent bolting to the ground. She stared up in fear, unable to move her broken body.

"Today you die Hannah! Today I kill you with a heart filled with Grief!" A beam of blue energy pierced the sky, slamming into the ground where Hannah lay.

It pulsed and glowed for a monet before shrinking down and vanishing. She was gone, obliterated once and for all.
"Maybe Senpai ate Yuka-tan's last bon-bon?"
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Now my new character...
Name: Caden
Age: 21
Blond hair
blue eyes
Power (future elder)
Can see the future when the decision is made for that to happen. But for some reason can't see the ending of this any time soon.
Cynical at times, scarcastic at others, but mostly sweet and caring.


Caden stepped out from around the bend clapping, in her cynical mood again. "Bravo, its taken you this long to kill her? I saw it much sooner...of course I can never be sure of the times. I'm sorry that I couldn't see this" She pointed at Sara's limp body, "or I would have come sooner."

Alexx, Owen, and Greg all stared at her blankly.

"I know you loved her Greg, well...love her. You'll love her forever, and she loved you."

"She's not dead," Greg said stubbornly, "she's just stuck in limbo"

Caden cupped his cheak in her hand, "she is dead, she has gone to heaven to wait for you." She paused, "and killing yourself will only get you sent to hell, and then what will happen to your children?"

"Who are you?"

Caden repressed a laugh and said, "how foolish of me, I already know who you are but you have no idea who i am!"

She got even more confused stares, "I'm Caden, the next elder." she paused again, and shrugged, "apparently i'm supposed to take her place."
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"No," said Greg, "you might be another Elder, but My wife will return! She cant be gone."

"You might as well accept, Greg," said Caden, "She is gone, But lok on the bright side, now you have me." she fluttered he eyelashes and laughed.

Greg was a little disgusted, how could anyone be so uncaring after someone had just lost their wife.
"Maybe Senpai ate Yuka-tan's last bon-bon?"
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Caden saw the look on Greg's face and softened a bit, she knelt next to him and placed a hand on his shoulder, "Maybe I could bring her back for one last word? She won't be tangible but you'll be able to say good-bye?"

Without waiting for a responce Caden waved her hand over Sara's body, not fifty yards away something shimmered and Sara appeared.

(I'll leave this part up to adam)
I just lost the game.



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