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The New and Improved Twisted and Completely Out There Story

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We can't have you dying off! We need a sane character in this!
Voldemort: You kids! If I ever find out who's calling I will tell the wizard law and you will go to wizard jail and then I'll kill you!

Harry Potter Puppet Pals - Wizard Swears




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OMG! Twisted is...dying!!! EEP! *passes out* We must plot this better.
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*bella just keep going with the story*
I just lost the game.




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**OKay Alice, than here it goes. I'm going to make something happen to move us foreward...maybe**


Alexx walked down the street, resisting her urge to sit down and break into tears. She was sick of being expected to save the world. What did the wordl ever do for her? Angrily, Alexx turned and kicked the nearest tree she saw.

"That probably hurt a bit," a smooth voice commented from behind her. She turned around, coming face to face with a very nice looking man.

"Nah, I"m fine." Alexx replied, turning to walk again. The man came up next to her, walking beside her.

"I'm Alex."

"So am I."

"Really? That's interesting." The man grinned. The grin frightened Alexx slighlty. She quickened her pace. "Hey, slow down," the man grabbed her shoulder.

"Let me go," she said, prying at his fingers. She didn't want to do anything rash, like use her powers, so she continued being firm.

"No, I'd rather not," he replied, grabbing her waist and pulling her close to him.

"Let me go." she said agian, jsut as sternly. He ignred her protests and pressed his lips to hers. She shoved him backward, runnign quickly back toward her house. Just as she turned the corner, the man grabbed her shoulder again. She didn't know how he had managed to catch up to her that quickly, but it worried her. She felt a sharp pain in the back of her head, and the world around her span.

**Good luck continueing on to this**
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Caden slipped around the group, Greg's attention fixed on his children and his wife, and Owen deep in conversation with the Matthius/Peter figure. She got the feeling that Alexx was in trouble, a powerful feeling that grew every second.

"Guys," she said hesitating at the door, "I think we need to find Alexx."

OWen looked up at her eyes panicked, "why?"

"Theres something out there, something not nice."
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"Duh, the banshee is like right outside." Peter laughed as he tried to get out of his crib.

"And you didn't tell us this why?" Owen growled.

"No one needed to know. I mean, no one was going outside. You better go save her..."
Voldemort: You kids! If I ever find out who's calling I will tell the wizard law and you will go to wizard jail and then I'll kill you!

Harry Potter Puppet Pals - Wizard Swears




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Bella! your turn! I wanna kill off caiden and make Sara permanatly back! It'd just take too long, have them find you and then i'll do the rest!
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Bella! your turn! *glares*
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**But I don't know what to do!! I don't even remember what happened last....**
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*have caden, greg, sara and matt save you from the evil place that you're at I'll take it from there*
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Alexx~

I was at an evil place...I wasn't sure where...everything was dark and I was slightly disoriented....

Voices...calling my name...Caden and Greg...and Sara...Matt too, I think. They were coming to save me...I hope.


***There ya go, Alexx is now officially very incoherant, because i'm that lost***
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