The New and Improved Twisted and Completely Out There Story

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Sara had an idea, "go to Chicago first. I need to talk to my old boss, I know he had something to do with it."

"You mean with Derby?"

"Yeah, he's got something to do with it, and if anybody knows it'd be the boss."

It wasn't long until they reached his office and Sara marched through.

"Excuse me, miss," the receptionist said, "You're not supposed to go up there."

"I think you'll find she can," Peter warned.
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"And who might you be?" The receptionist sounding unimpressed.
"Do you want to know who I am?" Peter growled. The room started to get icy." Do you want to know who I AM! You will let us go anywhere in this building or I will make it so your life will be HELL!" The woman fell backwards, thumping her head on the wall.
"Whoa Peter...what was that?" Greg asked as he and the rest of the group came out of hiding.
"Sometimes you never forget how to be evil. At least it-" Peter fell limp to the floor.
Alexx rushed over to him. "Peter! Peter! Answer me? Greg is he...is he-"
"Nope little lady, he's just fine." A tall man in a cowboy at glided into the room.
"What did you do to my brother!"
"Oh I just put him to sleep for awhile. Howdy Sara." the man turned to her.
"you know this creep?" Greg asked her.
"Yep he's my boss, except my boss didn't have the glowing red eyes..." Peter shifted. His mouth formed one word...
"Odin."
Voldemort: You kids! If I ever find out who's calling I will tell the wizard law and you will go to wizard jail and then I'll kill you!

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Sara pulled out her dagger descreatly and went foward, she was a second away from him, away from peircing his heart with it when he grabbed her arm and spun her around, holding the dagger to her thoat.

"Hello," he whispered in her ear. When Greg came foward he pressed the blade closer to her neck so hard he nicked the skin.

The thoat is the most vunerable part for a vampire, so everything that affected that area was multiplied tenfold.

She cried out when the blade broke the skin. Odin bent his head down and licked the blood. He moaned, "yum."

*happy mad?*
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As Peter layed there, paralyzed he realized something. Odin couldn't have just known they were going to be there. How?
"I can tell you Peter." Odin's voice rang out in his head.
"GET OUT! You have no control over me!"
"Yes I do Peter. You think that 15 years of control is just going to just be healed? I don't think so. I can make you great again. Very great."
"GET OUT OF MY HEAD!!!!" Peter sent a mental shockwave that sent waves of pain down his body. Yes it hurt but it was worth it if he got Odin out. He looked and saw odin's spirt shoot across the room, missing Sara's old bosses body by a hair. He was gone for now.
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"What the hell just happened?" Alexx asked, lookign around. She felt like she had just missed the whole fight, which she kind of had.

"Odin took over Derby...I think," Owen answered, looking around at the office, which was a disaster.

"That sounds about right," Greg agreed.

***Sorry, nothing to write...stupid writer's block.***
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Sara stood up and put a klenex to her neck, "Odin's a vampire," she said.

They gawked at her, "what?"

"O-din. Is. A. Vam-pire."

"How can you tell?"

She pulled the klenex back and pointed at the cut, "half-vampire blood is lethal to anything but vampires. If he's not a vampire he'd be dead."

"But we've fought him during the day."

"We've fought his forms during the day, not him," Greg said, his eyes fixed on the cut on Sara's neck.
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"To bad we cant just lure hm into the daylight," muttered Alexx.

"Sara?" said Derby confused, "What is going on?"

"We need to talk," she said, still dabbing her neck with the klenex. Derby lead the way to his office. The receptionist was still unconcious, but they thouht it better that way.
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"Question number one," Sara said, "how come you never told me that I was tailing you?"

"Because you'd work a lot harder."

"What? Was it a test or something?"

"Yes, my turn to ask a question: What the hell just happened?"

Sara sat down in a chair in front of the desk, "you were posessed, and tried to kill me."

"Is that the-" he pointed at her neck.

She nodded, "yes."

Derby dug through his desk and pulled out a box of band-aids. He handed the box to her, "thanks."
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Alexx sat with the others, looking completely and utterly confused. "WHAT THE HELL IS GOIGN ON?!?!" she screamed suddenly. Everyone looked at her, and one of them began explaining immediatly.


***I"m confuzzled and have nothing to write...I don't even know why we're goign for Odin yet because Alice summed it up for me.***
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"Odin is the one who made Peter do what he did, and the same with Greg. But I doubt he's making Hannah do what she's doing."

"And what is Hannah doing?"

"Trying to replace me," Peter said.

"Okay and whats all that have to do with me?" Derby spoke up.

"We thought you'd have some information about him, or what he's doing."

"I'm sorry to say but I don't." There was lies in his eyes.

"I don't believe you," Greg said.

"Believe it bub, I don't know anything about him, other than the fact that he took over me and tried to kill you all." He looked at Sara pitifuly, "But I will help you, that I swear."
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Greg pretended to accept this. He attempted to dig a little into Derby's mind but found it blocked. not just from Greg, but Derby himself could not attain what was locked in his mind.

"Odin..." Greg muttered to himself.

"Good," said Sara, "We need to get to Japan."

"I can handle that," said Derby, "I have a private jet a few miles from here. I'd be more than happy to let ya'll use it."
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"Thanks, Derby," Sara said standing up, "you'll be coming with us won't you?"

"Yes."

"Good, the more hands the better."

Derby stood and walked over to Sara, taking her hand in his and rubbing his thum acrossed it. She tried to pull it away but he brought it to his lips for a soft kiss.
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"Woah, now!" said Greg. He moved hastily closer to his wife, "Ring my friend." Sara blushed a little. Derby, however, was not pleased.

His face contorted in all manner of oddity before a fake smile emerged.

"Well, How wonderful for you both. Come on, We have a jet to catch."
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Alexx and Owen followed, feelign rather ignored, as Derby led the way to his jet. He and Sara were chatting happily, apparetnly catching up on old things that no one but they would care about. Greg hovered as close to Sara as he could get without looking innapropriate, obviously making sure that Derby kept his hands off.

***Sorry, i got nothing!***
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It took all her concentration to walk and not burst out laughing. Greg kept glaring at Derby who stayed as close to Sara and as far away from Greg as he could.

What a sight to see, she could only imagine the cruel and twisted thoughts that Owen and Alexx were thinking back there. She didn't even want to know what Peter was thinking. For a number of reasons.

She didn't think she had quite forgiven him yet, no matter how much he had redeemed himself. She still wondered why he hadn't died yet, all rational thoughts said he should be dead, at least twice, but then again...
I just lost the game.



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