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Greg appeared Next to Hannah. She leapt back a few feet and redied for battle.

"Now why in the world would I want to fight you?" She may have been fast but Greg no longer held back his abilites. He was behind her before she could blink.

With a swoosh he had her in a dip with his lips locked to hers

"Not bad," he said, "Some practice and you might be as good as Sara." Hannah flred up at him.

"I should kill you for that."

"Then you would be alone again and no one wants a hag for a girlfriend. Come along, we have plans to make." Greg walked along the stone temples halls to a small chamber to the side.
"Maybe Senpai ate Yuka-tan's last bon-bon?"
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Sara woke a few minutes later, her head spinning and when she realized what was going on, she wished that she was still asleep. Owen was still passed out on the floor and Alexx was freaking out about something. She needed to be there for whatever was wrong with her best friend now.

She swallowed her tears, and all her emotions, besides those she would need to help Alexx, she nearly ran to her and said, "Alexx whats wrong?"

"Mattius is gone!" She nearly sobbed.

"We have to find him!" Sara declared.

"But what about Greg?"

The look on Sara's face gave no need for a responce.
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"Who would of taken him?" Alexx exclaimed, pacing the living room, stopping now and again to make sure Owen was still alive.

"I don't know...I mean, we only have a few enemies...granted, those enemies are unbelievably powerful."

"What if..."

"What?"

"Maybe Hannah took him...so that she could raise him to be evil....oh god," Alexx muttered. "I think I'm going crazy."

"No, I think that's a pretty valid reason," Sara replied. Owen rolled over and Alexx rushed to his side. He moaned and opened his eyes slowly. They were no longer a dead shade a grey, but now a lively blue.

"Hey hun," he said quietly, sitting up and kissing Alexx on the forehead.

"You're ok?!" Alexx excliamed.

"Yeah, and feel," he took her hand and placed it on his chest. Buh-boom, buh-boom, buh-boom. "I havea heart beat again!" Alexx remained silent. "What's wrong hun?"

"Matthius...he's..."
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Owen didn't need any further explination, he took his wife into a tight embrace. Sara couldn't be positive but she thought she saw a tear roll down Owen's face.

She had never seen Owen cry, it kinda surprised her.

"What about Greg?" he asked as he pulled away for a moment.

Alexx bit her lower lip, almost hesitant about saying something.

"Hes- we- she-" she started to say each time.

"I didn't get there quick enough," Sara said.

"So he's..."

"With Hannah, but Greg's all grown up, he knows what he's doing. We need to find Mattius."

The athority and convinction she had in her voice startled them. A pregnant woman having just gone through this should be balling uncontrolably. But she held calm, and focused on helping them.

In her mind, Greg didn't love her anymore, and he never did. She wasn't about to make a fool of herself by balling over the one true love of hers, when all she was to him was... nothing. She wasn't anything to him.
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"I made you what you are! I will not let you order me around!" cried Hannah.

"I could give a damn less." Greg looked over a few maps. They showed the laife flow of the Earth. So many veins, so many ways to destroy the planet.

"You Bastard! I will Kill you!"

"Please," Greg flung Hannah into the wall, "You couldn't even kill Sara. You're nothing compared to us. Just a warped little whore."

Hannah Struggled. What had she done....what kind of monster had she unleashed onto the world.
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BELLAS TURN!!!
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"Oh my god!" Alexx had a sudden realization that caused her to sit down in awe.

"What is it?" Owen asked worriedly, looked down at her.

"Your powers...they were all because you were vampire...what happens now? Do you still have powers? And Matt is still half-vampire..."

"True...I have no idea, and I'm not worried about myself at all right now...We must find Matt."

"I have an idea!" Sara exclaimed suddenly.
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Well, here's my new character. Just thought him up. If he doesn't work, go ahead and kill him or something. And I don't want to give a character bio at the time(I'll explain later)

"Are you sure you can't do it?" The man in the black suit asked the teenage girl in front of him."If you refuse, well, you won't like it."
"He's my own father! You can't expect me to just kill him." She pleaded."Why do I have to kill him to be able to join?"
"Why?" A cold voice echoed through out the room. A tall. bald chinesse man oozed out of the shadows.
"I'm sorry master Huang but-"
"But killing the one you care for most is not what you signed up to do, right? When you wanted to join the Black Claws, you said you'd complete the tests. You already did your three other assingments but know you have to let go of this world."
"I can't!" She started to cry.
"Well then. I guess we'll have to dig two graves."
Voldemort: You kids! If I ever find out who's calling I will tell the wizard law and you will go to wizard jail and then I'll kill you!

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"They could be promising," said Greg as he watched from the building top. "The girl is so powerful...She just needs a bit of pushing."

"You cant just start abducting people," said Hannah,

"I wont. She'll be happy to stay with us." Greg leapt to the ground. With a swish the two men were agains the walls. "Come along. I'll get you away from these men." She wasted no time grabbing Greg's hand and following him.

Both guys are still alive not sure which was yours
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*ah bella head/desk I don't have an idea oh well i'll think of one in a little bit*
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Alright here i go...



Sara explained the idea, it was crazy but crazy enough to work.

"So you're saying that taking our DNA could help you find Mattius?" Alexx asked.

"Taking your dna will insure me finding Mattius."

"How?"

"I can cast a spell that will lock onto his genetic signature."

"From ours?"

"You're his parents aren't you?"

The door flew open, and Greg stepped in. Sara lost it then, she ran across the room and hugged him. She hit the floor with such force that it nearly knocked her out.
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"Dont touch me," Greg scowled, "Your filth is difficult to clean." Alexx and Owen were at their feet ready to fight. "Please, I have no intention of destroying you today."

Alexx clenched her fists, "Where is my Son you Son of A..." She was cut off.

"I had nothing to do with your son's vanishing act." Greg waved his hand tiredly, "All of you better find him fast. I just needed a little sample." A needle jabbed Owen and drained some blood before vanishing.

"Ouch!"

"Grow some nads Owen." Greg vanished in a swirl of darkness.
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Oy to the vey, i'm losing my internet soon guys so i won't be able to post a lot, just don't forget about me, and i'll post whenever I can.
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Sara sat on the floor and a swril of neausea came over her. Before anybody knew what happened Sara fled to the bathroom. The porceline felt cool against her hands, and it somewhat settled her stomach.

She knew it was just her pregenacy that made her sick, but she couldn't help but blame Greg. He should be there, holding her hair back for her.

As much as she tried to hate him she couldn't, she loved him, but he didn't love her. The thought was lie water on a fire, all her energy deminished and she was left to claw her way through life.

For a moment she was tempted to get an abortion and start over somewhere, or just dissappear. Already she could feel her heart slowly killing her, she fought the sorrow away. She'd see her children before she died.

If you don't see the foreshadowing here, shoot yourself!
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"Sara, are you ok?" Alexx called, knocking on the bathroom door. No anser. Slowly she turned the knob. She pushed again the door, and it flew off the hinges into the wall behind her...luckily she moved. "Sara?"

"Alexx, Greg must be stopped." Sara's voice was strong, but didn't sound right.

"Sara, I think you're disoriented."

"No, we need to find Matthius quickly. THen we must stop Greg." Sara's eyes were stone cold. "At all costs."
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