The New and Improved Twisted and Completely Out There Story

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In that short peroid of time Greg felt it. Sara not only blocked them but she was blocking herself. She was resricting her memories.

Greg stared out into the Ocean. It was swelling in an odd manner. Owen and Alexx came out and stodd behind Greg as a giant wave rose higher and higher.

"What is that!" said Alexx. Greg tried to control it to stop it but it wouldn't respond. The wave was getting closer.

"Run!" yelled Greg. The sea rushed beneath them and sliced into the beach making a giant trench between them and dry land.

The wave was upon them. Just as it was about to crash it stopped and hovered over them. Greg stared in awe as a face formed in the water.
"Maybe Senpai ate Yuka-tan's last bon-bon?"
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"Holy hell..." Owen muttered, staring into the wave in complete and utter awe. Alexx stepped backwards slowly.

"I see you," the wave spoke, it's voice a deep rumble that shook the ground around them and made smaller waves. It was cruel sounding as well.

"What do you want with us?" Greg shouted back, hiding any fear he may have felt. The wave laughed. "Answer me...Hannah!"
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"Hahaha," laughed Hannah, "I knew I couldn't fool you Greg."

"What do you want!?"

"Your soul of course." the water gushed into Greg.

"No!" screamed Alexx. Her magic burst into the wave, breaking the connection. Greg fell limp on the ground.

"He is mine!" scremed Hannah.
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"Oh shit, what do we do now?" Alexx said, pacing the room irrately.

"I don't know," Owen answered solemnly, grabbing her shoulders nad pulling her to the couch. "Hun, please sit down."

"No, how can I just sit? I have a souless man, my good friend, lying on my couch; my best freind is missing and doesn't know where she is; what do you expect me to do?" the phone rang. "I got it."
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"Alexx?" Sara asked.

"Sara? Thank god where are you?"

"I don't remember."

"Well you better find your way back quick, Greg-"

"What happened to Greg?" Her tone panicked.

"Um... Hannah has his soul." Everything came flashing back to her now, and anger flared up in her.

"Thanks for the update Alexx," she hung up. Hannah was going to die, Greg would get his soul back and Sara would deliver it to him.
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Greg stared at Hannah. He was being held in a small clear jar.

"You wont get away with this!" He yelled.

"Please, Greg. Sara was so easy to manipulate. I planted that dream so she would leave."

"She'll get you!"

"She might. But you;ll be long gone by then."

Greg was worried. He was powerless. The jar was containing his very essence and his body was so far away.

"Once I use your Soul I'll have my love back. and he'll be better than before." Hannah cackled as she walked.
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Sara stood at the shoreline, her anger so strong that even if this didn't work Hannah would die just from her thinking about her. "Hannah!" she screamed as loud as she could, "Hannah you bitch! I know you can hear me!"

High tide came in, earlier than it was supposed to and engulfed Sara." She floated in the water slowly losing conciousness, just before she blacked out she summoned a bubble to surround her.

When she woke up she was in a different place, there was cold stone beneath her and she was dry. At first she thought she was in a church, the last place she was before she was ordered to follow Derby. She was semi relieved to think that it was all a dream.

"Did you think it was all a nasty dream?" Hannah asked.

"For half a second, bitch." She rose to her feet. She could sense Greg's soul in a jar near by.

"Don't even think about it," Hannah warned. "I'm going to use his soul to get back my beloved."

"The same man who killed you and stole your powers?"

"He's changed, I know he'll have changed."

"No he won't he'll always be the cold heartless powerhungry maniac that he's always been!" Sara shot a blast of energy at hannah which knocked her unconcious. Sara grabbed the jar and dissappeared.

They reappeared outside Alexx's house. "Sara don't leave me again," Greg's soul pleaded. Without responding Sara took the lid off. As soon as she did his soul found his body as fast as it could and he chased after Sara. "Sara," he grabbed her arm.

"Let me go greg," her voice tinted with tears, "if I stay you'll die and I'd rather live my life miserably knowing you're alive than live it knowing you're dead." She tried to leave again.

Greg spun her around into an embrace.
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"What the hell just happened?" Alexx asked angrily, grabbing Sara by the arm and dragging her into the house. Greg followed, as did Owen.

"Hannah's gonna kill Greg if I stay," Sara protested trying to break free of Alexx's tight grip. This was getting more and more difficult emotionally.

"No she won't Sara," Greg argued. "It was a planted dream, she knew you'd believe it."

"Besides, we can kill her, no problem." Owen added.

"Honey, did you see that wave? That'll be a smidge harder to kill," Alexx replied, giving her husband the crazy look. "Sara, look at me. You love Greg, Greg loves you, and you're my best friend. I don't want you to leave, none of us do. We'll do whatever we have to in order to save you and Greg, and we know you'd do the same for us. If you're not here you're ruining that."

"But I might be savign you all."

"You won't be."
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You damn near killed us by leaving," Greg said. "I hate to say it, but we're all safer here."

"Yeah, Matt's powers activate when there is danger near. When we checked on him after Greg's soul was gone he had his barrier up," Alexx explained.

"Stay with us, Sara," Greg pleaded, Giving his wife the big puppy dog eyes he could never pull off.
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"I-I-I-" she tried to think of a new excuse, but realized she could if she wanted to, but she didn't want to leave again, "if I did it would-"

"It would save all our lives," Greg walked up to her, "especially mine."

Sara couldn't stand it anymore, if she left she would lose her mind, Greg came over and embraced her.

"Sara," he muttered, "I love you more than live itself."

She tipped her head up to look at him, tears coming out of her eyes, "promise you won't die on me?"

"I promise."

"Good," she buried her face in his chest.

"I promise
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"Now what do we do?" Alexx asked, taking Matt out of Owen's arms and rocking him gently. "We need to stop Hannah somehow...but we don't even know where she is."

"I don't get it," Sara muttered.

"What?" Greg asked.

"Why would she want to bring him back? He tormented her to no end...he was unbelievably cruel...he's better off dead. Why does she want him back?"
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"Love is blind," Greg said, "She was going to use my soul to infuse in him and hope that it would strip away the torment in his mind."

"How do you know that?" asked Sara.

"Meh, I was a soul. Had to do something to keep her busy. Villans always divulge the plan if they think they'll get away with it."
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Sara giggled, "they should watch more Bond movies."

"True, but what if she actually gets Peter back?"

"We kill him again, even if he is good, we cannot take the risk."

Sara hummed something to herself, "you know what sounds really good right now?"

"What love?"

"Pizza."
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"So when do you think she'll be back?" Owen asked. Alexx walked back to Matt's room and put him in his crib.

"As soon as she can manage, most liekly," Greg answered as Alexx reentered the room.

"Well, having Sara back will definetly be an advantage," Alexx decided, pouring herself a cup of coffee.

"Why is that?" Sara asked, trying to figure out why she was improtant.

"Becuase, if Hannah tried to get you to go away, she is at least slightly afraid of you." Alexx explained. "Coffee?"

"Nah, I think we all better get some sleep, we've been going on days with none." Owen asnwered.
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Alexx stood up, "you two are welcome to crash here if you'd like. We've got an air bed in the closet."

*sorry its so short gotta go, darn internet cerfu*
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