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Reminds of something liek the movie Run, fat boy, run (the guy wasn't even fat).
A guy or girl who doesn't try to hard in life has to learn that sometimes the best thigns are the things that you have to work for.

Journey's Dawn




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Action/Adventure, I think, or perhaps Fantasy. About a group of teenagers, on a journey. Can't think of anything more original at this point, sorry...

And that is one weird combination of words, seriously! That 'Dawn' part shatters everything I think of...


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mystery/thriller. sounds scary.

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It sounds like something in the past, maybe 1700's. I don't think I would pick it up, it's not exciting enough for me. But a History buff might.


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Seems like it would either be a book filled with cliches or putting a spin on cliches. That's all I can think of to fit that title.

The Pains of Human Flight




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Either a history book detailing the Wrights' various misadventures or a literary novel involving a young protagonist who overcomes extraordinary hinderances to reach a goal of self-actualization and awareness. Or some such thing. I would pick it up if the cover art caught my eye.



Zdeněk's Adagio




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Mmm, Slavic name...problem is, most people without a Slavic background won't be able to read/pronounce it, and it will bug them to pieces. If I weren't bored enough to look up the Polish pronunciation of it just now, I would have probably ripped out my hair in frustration. ^_~ Granted, it's a beautiful name, but just "Adagio" would be pretty as well. It's the horrid curse of having foreign characters- their names bother people.

But, yum, Slavs- I would so read it, pronunciation aside.

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I see a boy who is thought to be pretty much worthless by people around him, like a Child Called It or Loser. I wouldn't read it: sounds depressing.

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I like it, but hopefully not for a fantasy or Sci-fi piece.

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Huh. Interesting. It would be something that I would pick up. It depends though, because if it were fantasy, I would put it right back, but if si-fi, I would flip through the book. Good job! I like it. It is very mysterious.


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Nice. It would be a great Fantasy title or a vampire novel.

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Well, it sounds like bees. Obviously. Anyway, other than that, it could be like...a big secret group or something that is named the hive. Or a special place that only a few people know about...hey..I could write a story about that...*daydreams*
Anyway, it's good. I wouldn't really pick it up though, unless the cover art was really cool looking.

(and you were close with Midnight Darkness. It is about werewolves.)

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Sounds like some dark, emotional (but not emo) fantasy book...definitely something I'd notice in a bookstore and beg my mom to buy ^^

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Hm...sounds like an animal being abandoned, and then raised by Humans. Or a human being raised by wolves...sounds very cliche, sad to say.

It isn't something I would pick up, honestly.



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Sounds like a depressing (almost emo) story. I'd stay away.

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