Young Writers Society


Title Feedback

1473 posts1 ... 50, 51, 52, 53, 54, 55, 56 ... 99
User avatar
BigBadBear
Gender Male
Points 7740
Reviews 713
Sun Nov 18, 2007 5:45 pm
BigBadBear says... · Sun Nov 18, 2007 5:45 pm
Sounds like a killer pen. Lol!

Anyway, if it had a cool cover, I would pick it up, but the title enough would have me saying, "Who would want to write this?"

Eek! sorry!


BBB
Just write -- the rest of life will follow.

Would love help on this.




User avatar
Emerson
Gender Male
Points 32885
Reviews 2058
Sun Nov 18, 2007 5:48 pm
Emerson says... · Sun Nov 18, 2007 5:48 pm
I'm assuming "Eek! Sorry!" Is your title?

It's a bit bizarre, and I would probably want to know what it was about before actually considering reading it.

Into the Darkness
“It's necessary to have wished for death in order to know how good it is to live.”
― Alexandre Dumas, The Count of Monte Cristo




User avatar
Sam
Gender Female
Points 6090
Reviews 1258
Sun Nov 18, 2007 10:39 pm
Sam says... · Sun Nov 18, 2007 10:39 pm
It sort of depends- I usually assort 'darkness' with emo types of things. 'Into the Dark' would probably work better for me; I'm not a fan of 'ness' words. But! Even if it did have the first title, I'm pretty certain the front flap would convince me otherwise, considering it's you. ^_~

Holy Moses
Graffiti is the most passionate form of literature there is.

- Demetri Martin




User avatar
BigBadBear
Gender Male
Points 7740
Reviews 713
Sun Nov 18, 2007 10:45 pm
BigBadBear says... · Sun Nov 18, 2007 10:45 pm
(suzanne, I forgot to add my title to the last one I posted! lol!)

Huh...Holy Moses sounds like an olden day (B.C.) spoof on Moses. lol, I would read it, if it were funny.



Flying South (sorta)
Just write -- the rest of life will follow.

Would love help on this.




User avatar
Via
Gender Female
Points 3454
Reviews 694
Sun Nov 18, 2007 10:48 pm
Via says... · Sun Nov 18, 2007 10:48 pm
Hmm...a nat. geo. drama similar to 'penguins' only about actual flying birds during the winter. Possibly a disney movie, and possibly already made.


To Love A Baby [or Two]
My Literary and Arts Blog

"I think I'd miss you even if we'd never met." -The Wedding Date




User avatar
deleted1
Gender Male
Points 890
Reviews 73
Mon Nov 19, 2007 2:28 pm
deleted1 says... · Mon Nov 19, 2007 2:28 pm
Sounds like a comedy on FOX or WB. Not something like Family Guy's comedy, but rather a humorous events of trying to raise a kid.

Here's mine:

Blood Lily.




User avatar
BigBadBear
Gender Male
Points 7740
Reviews 713
Mon Nov 19, 2007 11:21 pm
BigBadBear says... · Mon Nov 19, 2007 11:21 pm
Ohh! I love that title! Sounds very mysterious. Most likely a mystery/crime novel. Very interesting. It would probably have a cool title. I would definately want to read it!


Beautifully Evil
Just write -- the rest of life will follow.

Would love help on this.




User avatar
MadHatter
Gender Male
Points 890
Reviews 141
Thu Nov 22, 2007 9:41 pm
MadHatter says... · Thu Nov 22, 2007 9:41 pm
I think they had a game show named that...no wait, that was Wickedly Perfect.

Supernatural Hunter
Voldemort: You kids! If I ever find out who's calling I will tell the wizard law and you will go to wizard jail and then I'll kill you!

Harry Potter Puppet Pals - Wizard Swears




User avatar
Gwenevire
Gender Female
Points 890
Reviews 441
Thu Nov 22, 2007 9:54 pm
Gwenevire says... · Thu Nov 22, 2007 9:54 pm
Some action shooting violent movie about some unreal man...

Moon Dancing




User avatar
MadHatter
Gender Male
Points 890
Reviews 141
Thu Nov 22, 2007 9:58 pm
MadHatter says... · Thu Nov 22, 2007 9:58 pm
Maybe a love story or something like that. It could have something to do with werewolves or vampires

A Pirates Life For Me
Voldemort: You kids! If I ever find out who's calling I will tell the wizard law and you will go to wizard jail and then I'll kill you!

Harry Potter Puppet Pals - Wizard Swears




User avatar
Gwenevire
Gender Female
Points 890
Reviews 441
Thu Nov 22, 2007 10:00 pm
Gwenevire says... · Thu Nov 22, 2007 10:00 pm
Pirates! Like those Pirates of the Caribbean stories...

I am on the high way to hell




User avatar
MadHatter
Gender Male
Points 890
Reviews 141
Thu Nov 22, 2007 10:11 pm
MadHatter says... · Thu Nov 22, 2007 10:11 pm
Sort of lame I guess...but its okay. Maybe it would be for a rock band story or something.

The Golden Days
Voldemort: You kids! If I ever find out who's calling I will tell the wizard law and you will go to wizard jail and then I'll kill you!

Harry Potter Puppet Pals - Wizard Swears




User avatar
Gwenevire
Gender Female
Points 890
Reviews 441
Thu Nov 22, 2007 10:17 pm
Gwenevire says... · Thu Nov 22, 2007 10:17 pm
Hey! That's already a movie! Its the second one to Elizabeth. So there XD




User avatar
Wolf
Gender Female
Points 1609
Reviews 602
Thu Nov 22, 2007 10:17 pm
Wolf says... · Thu Nov 22, 2007 10:17 pm
Golden Days...Sounds like a story about some kid and their dog. I might read it.

Wolf Heart
everything i loved
became everything i lost.

Would you like a review?
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic73903.html




User avatar
Gwenevire
Gender Female
Points 890
Reviews 441
Thu Nov 22, 2007 10:19 pm
Gwenevire says... · Thu Nov 22, 2007 10:19 pm
Your writing it! :D
Personally I don't like it... Sounds kinda cheesy.



Turn your demons into art, your shadow into a friend, your fear into fuel, your failures into teachers, your weaknesses into reasons to keep fighting. Don’t waste your pain. Recycle your heart.
— Andréa Balt