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A modern drama story where someone tells so many lies they find it hard to dig themselves out.

Not at the end
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Sounds like a story about teenagers and drugs for some reason, I doubt that its true but thats what I'm getting.






Vampires, and Werewolves, and Dragons, oh crap.
I just lost the game.




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Sounds kind of... cheesy? A little too blunt for my taste. Perhaps it is a humorous YA. Or a fanific, or a satire on the horror/fantasy genre? Horror + fantasy dragons = WTF? They don't mix IMO. hah.

Speakeasy
“It's necessary to have wished for death in order to know how good it is to live.”
― Alexandre Dumas, The Count of Monte Cristo




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It's something that would definately catch my eye in a bookstore.

Shades of Despair
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Sounds like something Dean Koontz would use, I would defiently stop and look at it.



Battles for our world
I just lost the game.




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Seems cliché. A lot of things battle for the world. Why should I care about this one? Perhaps if it was... "Battle for the world's water supply" or something, because then that might be some twist on the end-of-the-world-no-water scenario.

Thin Skin
“It's necessary to have wished for death in order to know how good it is to live.”
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A modern drama story about bullying. Lots of violence and very emotional.

Running from shadows
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Angsty novel about some tortured and twisted person who needs to make sense of what their life and family means. The ending will have a dark and dramatic twist conected with death and passion. Not my kind of thing, really.


Beggar Brother, Beggar Sister.
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Hmm...possibly witty story; my first impulse would be that it's set historically, but I could be wrong. :wink: Kind of threw me off, though, because you sort of expect it to be a play on words (what with the repetition), but it's not. But, I guess any wondering about a book is good wondering.

The Eternal Darkness of Beatrice McCoy
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Sounds like something about a depressed teenager. Not the good kind. But I would probably at least look at the cover...names in the title...not my cup of tea.

We are the Flame
But that is not the question. Why we are here, that is the question. And we are blessed in this, that we happen to know the answer. Yes, in this immense confusion one thing alone is clear. We are waiting for Godot to come. -Beckett




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Fantasy. Epic fantasy written in first person about some clique of mystical people, though considering your other stuff, JC, I doubt it's that. :wink: The title sounds definately attractive. :)

What sounds better, The Legacy of the Elephant, or The Elephant's Legacy?
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I'd have to say The Elephant's Legacy, just because I don't like titles with of in them.

PSIlence




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I'd have to say change up the way you present it visually, because at first glance it's a bit confusing.

Innocence in Bliss




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*takes pervy cap off* that looks like a romance. (removing the pervy cap was necessary to write that, just trust me, some of my friends are very bad influences)






The truth about loving a vampire.
I just lost the game.




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A comedy story about a Vampire who has decided to change sides and finally fill all his desirers, like getting married! :D

Those red cherries
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