I want to review poems!!!!

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Hello Friends!!!! Ellie Here!

If you know me, you know that I am obsessed with poetry. I love writing. I post it on my wall or publish it basically every day. Don't get me wrong, I love reading stories, but poetry is my favourite right now.

I've noticed a lack of poetry in comparison to novel chapters in The Green Room. I'm more than happy (and greatly enjoy) reading stories, but i am specifically requesting that you to send me your poems for me to review! I'm not the best, but I will read them and enjoy them and write you a review with some feedback :)

What I review
-POETRY: I am fine with cursing or any age restrictions or topics, as long as it follows the YWS rules. I am fine with 18+ or mature topics.
-LYRICS: Same rules as poetry.
-Spoken word poetry
-Visual pieces
-Life narratives/personal reflections/vent pieces written in short story style.
-Old poems/new poems, as long as they are posted on YWS

What I may review
-I normally don't have time to go back and read an entire novel, but I will review a specific chapter if wanted. I will mostly focus on providing feedback on your writing style and world building and impressions of what I see.
-Essays: If you have written and posted an essay for school, I can read through and help with spelling and grammar.
-Short Stories: Specifically horror! Or historical fiction, dystopian pieces.

What I will not review
-Anything that breaks the YWS rules.
-Anything written by AI. If you use AI to make cover images or graphics, that is fine, as long as you have given credit to the AI site.
-Anything plagiarized/spam like.
-Anything written to bully someone.

All reviews are free!

Please send poems!

-Ellie
Last edited by EllieMae on Thu Jul 04, 2024 5:50 pm, edited 5 times in total.
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uh uh uh uh uh I have a poem

it should be in my portfolio and if not its sitting in green room
[soon, i will submit myself to the stars]




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I MADE A SECOND COLLECTION OF POEMS
[soon, i will submit myself to the stars]




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hey ellie! i would love if you could take a look at this poem of mine when you get a chance <3
previously MomoandAppa, LordMomo, MomoMajesty, and dancingontheclouds




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I have a whole folder of poetry in my portfolio :) Love your reviews <3
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I just wrote one called iworry but it's not very good... I stayed up late last night cause tired inspiration struck. I would still like to see you review it because I love a poetry enthusiast/enthusiastic poet and your reviews are always great. :)
spot~pebble~peb~pebb~
in any order
they/them



perhaps i can make something of this unreality...
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hello! I hope you're having fun on your trip. I don't know if you're still doing this but could you look at this poem ( I get if it's a bit heavy or if you've read it already )

Book one : Reading ( Act ) One Prelude. The Reversed Hanged Man.

Thankd for hearing me out. Have a great day!




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I have a poem, it should be available in my portfolio.

I'll embed a hyperlink Right here.




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Hi Ellie! I had a poem written about a month or so ago called Blooming Crimson. It’s an anthology of poems all relating to each other. Feel free to review it if you want, and you can just review one or two poems in it (since it’s an anthology) or all of them, depending on your mood.
The world needs more sparkles




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Hey I know I made a post on here a while ago but I was wondering if you could look at a updated version of Pandora Shattered.

Pandora Shattered. ( Slightly revised.)




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I have this poem
I'd appreciate a review on this. Please dont worry about being too harsh, I want to know how I can improve this :D




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Hi Ellie! If you are still accepting, could you perhaps review this poem? Thank you so much! :)

a spider on a wet mirror
Good is not a thing you are. It's a thing you do.
- Ms. Marvel

LuminescentAnt ~ Lum ~ Ant
(she/her)




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this please
[soon, i will submit myself to the stars]




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Hi Ellie, please review my story-- Layers of Life: The cloth chronicles 🙏




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sooooo it could be as an stand alone but if you want better understanding I recommend reading the first part then coming to the 2nd one lol.
but I would like this one reviewed please: Yes That's Me Part 2
I promise this type of pain only gets worse
~Esmeraya~

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Deal with the faults of others as gently as with your own.
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