the momonster reviewster

hello! i hope you're doing great today.

i will review pretty much anything, just nothing with explicit content. my reviews focus mainly on grammar. i'll get to your reviews within 1-3 days of your request, but i will let you know if it will be longer. i hope my reviews are to your satisfaction! <3

I wrote a little poem called The Passing the other day. It's not amazing but I wouldn't mind a review!

Here's the link!

The Passing

@MapleWay your review has been given! Thanks for requesting!

Lómë, the Maiden of Aloth Tiren

Poetry

Pls review Love
And Because I love fun staffs

Hope you will enjoy

@Vil /Kendall, your review has been given! Thanks for requesting!

@ForeverYoung999 your review has been given! I'll get to the other one tomorrow; thanks for requesting!

Hello. Pls review Cortez Shivick (Chapter 1)

It is a novel chapter

Exodus
It's a in-progress novel. I think the thing i need to improve the most is my dialogue.

Link to work: questioning:
Type of work: (Poetry)

@hannah0528 thanks for requesting! I'll try to get to your review today.

Link to work: crows gather at the funerals of their own children
Type of work: Poetry
Warnings: Death and how death changes families is a reoccurring theme, but it's only just mentioned and not explained in great detail.

@chikara your review has been given! Thanks for requesting!

Bright Lights
Link to work:
Type of work: poetry.)
Warnings: Its about me coming out to my family (only required if the work has questionable content)

Hi, could you please review my last two chapters? Fool Without A Master (Chapter 3 Part 2) and the next one. Or even better, from the first chapter if you have the time

It's historical fantasy/romance