Hey, Kendall!! I am here with a review, as requested!
This was really good!! I love to read your poetry, because it's always so well written! The rhymes are just so good!! You're such a great poet. Great job!
Lómë*, my love,
The asterisk looks out of place here. I know it's guiding you to the note at the end, but I think you should take it out and have the part at the end titled "Author's Note" or something like that.
and each night,
I think you should replace "each" with "every" to match the rhythm.
That's it! Sorry for such a short review lol, it was so well written I couldn't find more than this! Again, great job, and keep writing!
Momo
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