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Star's Reviews


Hey there, welcome to my review request thingy! c:

What I Will Review

I'm open to pretty much anything! Poems, stories, novels (although if you request a review for a middle chapter, I will probably not read previous chapters), and whatever else!

Note: I don't think I will be good at reviewing art, as I'm not a very experienced artist.

Credibility

feelings of music

colourful musings

Chronicles of Valarian 5: Into the Storm

Echoes of Summer

Other

- If for any reason I do not want to review your work, I can decline it.

- If there is something specific you would like feedback on, please let me know!

- I plan to complete your review within a week, but I do apologize if it takes me longer. I will probably get it done on a weekend.

- To request a review, just leave a reply with the link!


Thank you <3
Last edited by starlitmind on Tue Sep 08, 2020 10:57 pm, edited 5 times in total.
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Hey star! I'm honored to be your first request. I'd really appreciate your thoughts on this poem of mine when you have the time!
[he/him]

"tiktok and giving children meth are my passions" ~ @ShadowVyper
"carinas long foretold chaos protege" ~ @veeren
"smol bean, future of chaos" ~ @carina




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Hey, @Tuckster! :D Thanks a bunch for the request; I'll try to get to it soon! <3
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hi! i would be honored if you reviewed my works! here's the link to one:

sand

thanks! :D
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Hello, @MomoandAppa! :D Thank you very much for the request; I'll try to get it done soon! <3
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np take as much time as you need!
previously MomoandAppa, LordMomo, MomoMajesty, and dancingontheclouds




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Okay! I’ve finished both of yours and am open for more requests :D
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Here's the first chapter of some old stuff I'm revising.

The Middle Years - Chapter One
The politics of the world may be corrupt, but that does not mean that we must be corrupted ourselves.




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Thanks for the request, @Vil!! I’ll try to get it done as soon as possible c:
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Thanks :)
The politics of the world may be corrupt, but that does not mean that we must be corrupted ourselves.




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hey star! i'm back with another request!

The Guard
it's a script, not a story, so if you don't want to review it, that's totally fine! thanks!
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Hey, you! c: I’m totally open to reviewing it, @LordMomo! I’ll try to get to it as soon as possible <3
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thanks! take as much time as needed, there's no rush!
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Hey there, star!

I have a new story I've started for LMS that I'd love feedback on. <3

His Name is Richard - One
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Hey, @Vil, thanks so much for requesting a review!! c: Realistically, I probably won't get to it until this weekend; I hope that's okay with you! <3
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