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Hey Nikayla,

I'd love if you could review my (very) short poem Oblivion.

Any feedback is greatly appreciated!
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Sure can! I'll get that review out to you as soon as possible.

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Forgot to mention that's done! I'm pretty sure you already replied to the review, though. Mental note for myself though that review has been dished out.

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Please review Cannot Be Touched, Heard, or Seen / Not a Matter, is Mute, and Invisible please! Note: it is meant for a spoken poem.
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@Lightsong I'll get on that hopefully in a day or two! I'll let you know when it's finished.

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@Lightsong It is done! Enjoy.

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Hi! I would love it if you could review any of the poems posted below! Thank you for your time!!

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@EKK15 I'll get onto these in the next day or two! I'll notify you when they're both done.

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Please review God's Assassin ★ 3. It's part of a short story, so you might want to read the previous two to get a better understanding of what's going on. Thanks!
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@Lightsong I've already reviewed the first part. I'll start on the second and go from there since I may as well follow this. :3

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Done with your requested reviews @EKK15, enjoy!

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Review this please? It definitely needs some work. I could use some help. Thanks!



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Hi! It'd be wonderful if you could review this first part to my short story.

(so don’t lose me, follow me home) : 1/5




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I'll be glad to get to both of you @tay73 and @mephistophelesangel in the next day or two!

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Reviews are finished @tay73 and @mephistophelesangel. Enjoy!

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