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The Mage's Tower

Rebooted!


After a very successful summer that was full of reviews, I finally have gotten back into reviewing! My goal when reviewing is to give constructive criticism while also highlighting all of the wonderful things in your work. If that's the type of review you're looking for, you've come to the right mage. If it's not, I suggest checking out some of the other threads in this forum!

All that I ask is that you request your story using the format that I posted down below, and that you don't request reviews for the following types of works: ones that are 18+ for reasons other than violence or language, poetry or chapters of novels that are not chapter one. The only exception to the last rule is if I read the previous chapters.

I hope that my reviews can help you improve your writing!

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Hey there, could you please review:

Starlight: Chapter 2 (Part I)

If it's not too much to ask, could you also review the second part of Chapter II as well?

Thanks in advance !




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I lowkey want to dump a whole book on you for you to review (300+ pages in google docs) but that seems like something for your "devouring books" phase and I'm also a flip floppy blob who can't decide on what I want you to review
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Your review is done, @yizhongt! :D

When you decide what needs reviewing, @soundofmind, you know who to message. :D
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Hi Magestorrow. May I request a review for this chapter one of something I'm working on?

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Your review is done @AnarchyWolf!
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Thanks for the reviews @Magestorrow! Really appreciate it. Could you please review:

Starlight: Chapter 3 (Part I)

Thanks in advance!




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You're welcome, @yizhongt! I was worried my reviews weren't going to be good enough. Speaking of reviews, yours is done! :D
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Thanks for the review @Magestorrow! Could you please review:

Starlight: Chapter 3 (Part II)

Thanks in advance!




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I'm busy this weekend, @yizhongt, but I'll try to review it as soon as possible.
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Hey @Magestorrow, thanks for the reviews you've made. Really appreciate them! If time permits, could you please review:

Starlight: Chapter 4 (Part II)

Thanks in advance!




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I'd be happy to! :D It might take awhile, but I promise to review it as soon as I can!
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I need a review done and dusted. I just crave that Feedback!
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I'd be happy to do it, @Leeker. It just might take awhile because I'm busy for the next two weeks. Could you please post the link here?
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Your review is done, @yizhongt! :D
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