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I reviewed your work, @RubyRed!
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Please review "The Bottled Beauty"
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Alright! Since there's some other things I need to review, @Ejay1806, I'll review it on June 10th. Also, can you please fill out the form that I posted in the first post of this forum? Thanks!
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I reviewed all three parts of your first chapter, @Sheadun! I hope my reviews helped.
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You were looking for more requests, so would you mind reviewing my 3 chapters of Hunter I've written so far?

Hunter: Chapter 1.1 - Pack [Edited]

That's the first one; the others are linked on the side of that page as per usual
"All that is gold does not glitter,
Not all those who wander are lost;
The old that is strong does not wither,
Deep roots are not reached by the frost."


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Sure thing! I'll get them done over the course of the next three days, @FalconryGirl9086!
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Thanks! :)
"All that is gold does not glitter,
Not all those who wander are lost;
The old that is strong does not wither,
Deep roots are not reached by the frost."


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Hi! Could you please review the first part of my short story?

Work: (so don't lose me, follow me home)
Link: (so don’t lose me, follow me home) : 1/5
Brief Description: Outsiders observing two men who seem a bit more unusual than most.
Other: Rated 12+ because the story (indirectly) deals with mental health issues and trauma.




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I'll review it in a couple of days, @mephistophelesangel! It already sounds really interesting from the description.
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I wanna dump all of my story drafts on you, then I realized they're not even halfway done. But I published a short story recently, could you review it?

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I could definitely review it, @gxldencrxwns! Could you please fill out the form I have in the first post, though? I would really like if people filled it out when requesting a review. Thanks!
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Sure, let me try again!

Work: She Likes Girls
Link: She Likes Girls
Description: Lance finds out his girlfriend, Candice, has an eye on someone else. Someone of the same gender.




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I reviewed your work, @FalconryGirl9086! I'll review your work tomorrow, @mephistophelesangel, and your work the day after that, @gxldencrxwns!
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I reviewed your work, @mephistophelesangel! I hope my review helped.
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I reviewed your work, @gxldencrxwns! I hope my review helped, and and don't be afraid to ask me any questions you have about it!
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If all pulled in one direction, the world would keel over.
— Yiddish proverb