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Basically, I'll review stuffs with my super spectacles on.

I best review short stories and poems. I'll try to review novel chapter but sometimes other chapters should be read too. I will not review anything longer than three thousand words.

I like to review stories in:

- fantasy
- romance
- action/adventure, and
- mystery/suspense genre.


Horror stories are fine too. I also welcome philosophic pieces. However, I have no interest on reviewing:

- sci-fi
- historic ones


This preference also applies to poems. I don't review lyrics and scripts but I'll consider articles.

Also, I've made slots, which filled requests and make limit for them:

1. -available-
2. -available-


Added features:

Novel Following

Two slots for me to follow three novels. I would review every chapter of them, and if my review doesn't appear for a week, you can notify me. If you've seen me reviewing your work for the most part of it, be no mistaken that I've no responsibility to do that unless you take the slot.

1. felistia, Search for the Ruby of Fire

Story Maker

Two slots for this. I'm going to make a request template for the story you want me to make. You can see it below:

Title: [optional, you can leave it to me to make it]
Genre: [three are the max. amount of genres I can try to achieve]
Synopsis: [the story you want in general - at least make it four or five sentences, the more the better]
Other things: [what you want in specifics]


I welcome those who like to pay me by reviewing my pieces. I would appreciate it but I won't force you. With that being said, go on, prepare some pieces for me!
Last edited by Lightsong on Tue Oct 25, 2016 2:36 am, edited 7 times in total.
"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

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Hey Labrador, could you please review:

Chalice of Life: Chapter 6

Thanks in advance !




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Hi Labrador, it would be brilliant.

if you could read:

The Letters I Never Wrote (Introduction/Prologue page)

Then-

The Letters I Never Wrote (Chapter one)


They are proving very popular so far, and I'm currently working on chapter 2, but the more reviews the better I can make it continue.

Thank you :-)
The Enemy

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I don't review, I'll say I do for the sake of it, I critique, and correct.

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@yizhongt: Done! :D

@Enemy: I'll finish yours soon! :D
"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

- David L. Ulin




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@Enemy: I've reviewed the first chapter only and I think that's enough. My review on that regarding grammar applies to the prologue as well. :) Thanks and visit again next time! :D

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"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

- David L. Ulin




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Hey Lightsong, could you please review :

Chalice of Life: Chapter 7

Thanks in advance !




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Hi, I'd appreciate it if you reviewed my short story Xynophen. Thanks a ton.
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@yizhongt and @tigeraye: Check your stories to see the reviews - I've done making them! :D See you again!

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"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

- David L. Ulin




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Mine is sci-first + action adventure so could u pls review? Pleeeeeeeease?




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Do my chapter 2:We are in Very Big Trouble pls




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Can you review Before Beauty for me?
Thanks!
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@LordZeus and @ChloeJoelle: Both reviews are done! Just a little advice: next time you guys request here, please put in the links of the stories. Thank you! :)

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"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

- David L. Ulin




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Light!
*review chapter 3 for me, pretty please*
You did two or one, I think.

Here, have a link: Thrallmagic: Chapter 3
Let the blood pour down in rivers as the world burns.




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Hey light, could you please review:

Chalice of Life: Chapter 8

Thanks in advance !




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@QueenOfHearts and @yizhongt: Done and done! Come back later! :D

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"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

- David L. Ulin



Bring something incomprehensible into the world!
— Gilles Deleuze