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@felistia: Done! Come back again sooner or later! :D
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Hi! I was wondering if you could read and review an extract from a novel I'm working on. Here's the link : Bad Seed (extract)


I'm uploading a whole novel on here and I'm about half way through it already. I would appreciate reviews on that but if you don't have the time I understand, it's quite long. Here's the link anyway: The Progeny (Prologue)

Thank you and hope you enjoy :D




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@MissGangamash: It'd take a while to review the Bad Seed's excerpt, so hopefully you'll be patient! :D Unfortunately, I can't review The Progeny right now as I'm reviewing another novel, and my status as a worker limits my reviewing.
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The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

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Thank you :) I will be patient haha. And no problem about The Progeny, I didn't expect you to have the time but I though I'd just ask :)




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@MissGangamash: Done! Come back again sooner or later! :D
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The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

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*blows dust on topic* ;)
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The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

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Can you please review my novel, New Haven.
Here's the link to the first chapter:
New Haven: Chapter 2: The Train of Memories




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@MadWriter7: That's the second chapter, not the first. Which one you want me to review? >.>
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Heya Lightsong!

I was just wondering if you'd mind taking a mosey on over to the first chapter of my novel. Would be much appreciated :P

The Boy Who Broke Mirrors (Chapter One)

Please and thank you!
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Somehow I feel like this is the effect of putting a new status in my profile... e.e THAT BEING SAID, I would try reviewing this chapter quickly, @Skins, using the phone. >.> If I don't review quickly, it means I'd review it eventually, when I buy a new laptop charger. :D
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Oh that's fine, no worries!
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@Skins and @themanofstars: Reviews done! Do come back again soon! :D
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The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

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Do you review any realistic romances?
Ohana Means Family~ Chapter Two

Please :)
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