Hermione's Reviews

Hello witches, wizards, muggles, and squibs! This is Hermione and I suppose it's round time I made one of these pages. If you're needing reviews, my reviews are honest and kind at the same time. I will point out things that I like and dislike, and I'll also mention what I think you could do to make your pieces better. Here is what I will accept:
-poetry
-novel chapters (early chapters, preferably)
-short stories
-articles
-lyrics

Here are things I won't accept:
-fanfiction (that isn't Harry Potter or Percy Jackson)
-anything rated 18+

I'll do my best to make my reviews as detailed as possible. I'm skilled at grammar and punctuation and capable of tearing pieces apart for mistakes in those areas, but I won't if you specify you'd rather me focus on content.

I will review your pieces as quickly as possible. Hopefully I can review each of them within the week they are requested. I'm not asking for anything in return for my reviews; a simple thank you will suffice. Let me know if you have any questions. Thanks!

Hi, Hermione. I was wondering if you could review a short story for me. Here it is:

Dangerous Creatures

Thanks If you need anything reviewed, please let me know.

@bluewaterlily I'm all done! Anyone else?

Hey there could you please review

The Chalice of Life: Chapter 1

P/s it is somewhat like Harry Potter, I drew a lot of inspiration from there, a lot. Would like to see what you think. Thank you

@yizhongt I'm all done! Phew! That was a long review. Anyone else?

hey could you check out my poem

perfection

I'm all done @SilverRose. Keep the pieces coming people!

I would love if you could review my chapters from The Tree People (some may still be in the green room) and also Curses (Prologue)

The more harsh you are the better. (Do note I am working on showing and not telling) I really really want to improve.

I appreciate it immensely! Thank you!

Hey hermione315, could you please review

Chalice of Life: Chapter 2

I would really like your feedback. Thank you very much. Cheers !!

I'm all done @yizhongt.

@roeckercody, please give me a bit of time to look over your pieces, and I'll get back to you. It might take a while because I'm going to be really busy the next few days. Next time you request could you please send me links to the pieces you want me to review? That would be extremely helpful. Thank you!

Hey Hermione, would you be so kind to give some feedback for

Chalice of Life: Chapter 3

And perhaps chapter 4 if time permits.

Please and thank you !!

I'm sorry for the tremendous delay, @yizhongt, but I'm finally finished with your review of chapter three!

Anyone else?

Hey @hermione315, no problem at all. If you could review the other chapters it would be great. Thanks in advance !

Please review this sub-chapter! When Dream and Reality Collide [Chapter 1.0]

Hi!

I've looked up one of your previous reviews and I'd really like a review from you. My work's still in the Green Review, if you hurry up xD It's a first chapter.

So, I'd like you to make a detailed grammar review (one quote for each type of mistake is enough) and an overall one on the characters (but if you do guess something about the plot, do elaborate). Apart from the grammar, I'd like you to tell me what do you think will happen next.

I've also posted in the Review Trading Center
Anyway, my work is titled 1 Too early might as well be worse than too late