PMD: Seventeen Plates DT 2

@Charizard821: What an excellent post! The quality is exceptional, and it was definitely something that I enjoyed reading from start to finish. I like how easily the entire story flows. It goes from serious conversation to more lighthearted, humorous conversation that eventually transitions back into what it started out as, and it is impressive how skillfully you make sure that the entire flow of the post is consistent and makes sense. The end was touching, surprising, and it was a fantastic conclusion to an amazing story. Well done!

Thank you, @TheSilverFox. Can't wait to write some more of these! My next one may star either Articuno or Yveltal.

@Charizard821 well according to @15253's analysis, you got yourself a pretty darn good ace.
Just not in my eyes, but I'm ONE guy, and a CRAZY guy on top of that, so fret not: my opinion's not the universal truth.
And it's still a pretyt catchy song.

@Bugiedude2340 If you go ever stop by Toulouse if you go to France, I might as well say hi, since I'm there.
Also, the Natural History Museum is the REASON I want to go to New york, BECAUSE DINOSAURS. And Super predators in generals, to be fair, I love me some Lioplerodons. And Predator X, more recently.
Just... There should be a a few water-based pokemon entriely based on the Pleiosaurus-style, they're amazing creatures.

Phantom of the Oprah? Enjoy!
Huh... Birthdays everywhere this month, huh...

@Robusto Welcome back, and thank you! I told you: I LOVE Zulu. And he needs more love.

And oooooh yes. Latias is back. Which means that they'll all live happily ever after

Two more? Good. Let's see how evil this guy truly becomes

@Charizard821 ...Dude, You posted this LITERALLY AS I WAS FINISHING MY POST, HOW CAN YOU SEE DA FUTURE SO CLEARLY.
And just to troll, too :/ But lemme edit this to make a post review tomorrow. Let's see how you handled this filler!

Haha, you all don't know it yet, but Tort and I had a rather lengthy discussion today about how I manage to always post right before he does. XD

heyo @TheSilverFox you still posting for our group? If not I'm gonna go >3>

@Charizard821 I actually spent one more hour re-readin' it with Waluigi Pinball Playing in the background. 'Twas fun.
Now! the review...

-That's fun to be in Riley's conflicting mind again, but SERIOSULY why's this thing so popular. Twinkiel, Zulu, Riley and to some extent even Ren kinda does it.
Though I guess it's not so bad, since each of our characters handle their inner voices differently.
-Theeeeeeeeere you go. Perfect introduction of yourself there, Twinkiel. Good job, Char, looks like you got the character's behavior pretty well XD
-... ""People are always in a laughing mood. You just have to say something funny!" ...GAH. That's... That's freakin' perfect.
...Darn it.
-*raises eyebrows* Twinkiel would actually spend more time talkin' about random stuff than girls and relationships, but let's see how you handle this one.
-HA! Nice dodge, Twinkiel. I won't allow you to escape the Servine talk though. *takes notes*
-"Bro, I enjoy fantasizing about torturing people. Something about that usually doesn't scream "attractive" to girls." <--- Easily my favorite line out of the entire post. Darn, between Riley's reactions, Twinkiel's answers and everyone else's reactions, you're NAILING this conversation!
-I know, right? Darn it Riley, stop thinking that there's nothing special about you, you used to be human being, being unique is like one of their main characteristics! ...Right next to similarity, lol, but you get the point!
-O.o I'm... kinda sure Twinkiel would've flown back up onto Fleedjio's back, 'cause it's cool to fly anyway, but not gonna lie: that was AWESOME. It's not me writing this post, so I can't ask for every tiny bitsy thingy to be exactly the way I imagine it.
...Yeah it's fine, though Twinkiel wouldn't use his Cotton Guard to stop his fall. He'd use the Voltek Fleece. Why stop your fall when you can glide over the ground?
-Yes, he gave the Dawn Stone away! Neat.
-Meh. Not so ridiculous, Riley. Relationships tend to form much more easily when you're on an unplanned adventure with someone. It's a real thing!
-D'aaaaaaw. Now see, that's a nice little throwback right there. All these little moments durin' which they enjoyed themselves. That's actually kinda cute, even for me!

Whew! Well there ya go, end of the filler, on a happier note than I thought it would end.

Pace: Check.
Cuteness: Check.
Masterfully fun dialogue: Check.
Personality of talking characters: Check.

Yup! This post is Twinkiel-Approved!

Now all I need to do is post one little thing to make the plot Advance, because @AstralHunter is going ahead of us, so I'd like for our group to at least REACH Cutthroat Path before he does so.

However, Astral, keep on writing, I'll improvise if you post before me.

Great post Char! That last part with Riley remembering all of what he said to flurry leading up to that one line. amazing bro. That post was so innocent and human, its impossible not to like it.

Thanks for the feedback, @Tortwag! I actually spent like, an hour and a half going back and reading all of mine, as well as some of Buggie and Hunter's posts for that end bit. Also, perhaps Twinkiel would fly back up, but he's always seemed like a bit of a daredevil, so why not skydive straight into the ground using wool to break your fall?

...

Nothing could POSSIBLY go wrong there!


Anyways, I assume the way this works now is I post for Riley, Tort for Twinkiel and Robocop for Zulu in the triangle sense? If so, then I won't have a post for Riley for a bit, but I can post something for one of my two Legendary bird characters.

Haha, I was about to post this response to Tort, @15253, but same goes for you. Thanks so much for the compliment. I love posting just to hear the way everybody reacts.

In fact, this is my next poll.
Does it feel better to receive praise based on something you worked hard on, or unexpected praise for something you didn't work very hard on?

I've been in both scenarios, and let me tell you, it's a tough choice.



Anyways, I look forward to what @Verser, @AstralHunter and @Buggiedude2340 thought of the post. I'll be looking for your comments, guys! ^^

@Charizard821 You did well, the resulst is clear.

...Well yeah, but he kinda likes his life, lol. What I'm trying to say is that when he does reckless actions like that, he takes the safest solution to stay alive. That's one of the few remnants of logic he has left in him XD His inner echo would be like "You can fly. Fly back up. Don't die like an idiot."

Don't change your post, though, I like the idea that his teammates remind him that "HELLO. YOU CAN'T DO STUFF LIKE THAT."


We don't really have an order, and I actually am 3/4 done on my Twinkiel post. Again: it's just to show us approach Cutthroat Path, it's nothing big.

As for your poll, I've been in both too, actually, especially the second. And actually, I have a history of moments in which I didn't work much on something and get praised, and when I actually work on something that's better (to my eyes) than the thing I didn't work for, I don't get the praise I'm looking for.
...I don't know how this works XD

Point being, I prefer the first case.

I am double-posting for the sake of bringing back this long lost habit.

EVERYBODY FREEZE. My post is ready, i'm just spell-checkin' it.

*freezes*

a great filler with a fleshed out description of Riley's feelings for the other characters around him as well as how he feels about himself

DONE! I have posted at last.
*pulls out flamethrower*

Now to unfreeze @Charizard821 ...

*spits at char*

llama spit is acid .3.

Thanks @Tortwag. Anybody got a base? Llama spit is acid.