Reviews!

I'll review any work of any genre, length, or rating. My reviews will be detailed, long, and (hopefully) helpful If you're unhappy with your review, just shoot me a message and I'll redo it!

When Asking For a Request
It would be best if you specify what you'd like me to focus on (characters, grammar, word choice, etc.) If you don't specify, I'll try to cover as many aspects as I can. I'll always try to include criticism and compliments, but let me know if you want me to focus on one or the other.

I'm best at reviewing:

Essays
Novels
Poems

I'm best at complimenting/critiquing:

Grammar
Word choice
Realism
Characters

For reference, here are a few of what I consider to be my better reviews:

The Hater Horse (I consider this my best critical review. However, the author seems to have changed the text completely)

Carnation : The Assassin's Tears - Chapter 1 (Another critical review, this one on the beginning of a novel)

I long to catch the ocean (One of my best complimentary reviews)

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@ArtStyx I went to go review your piece, but when I found the link there was nothing there.

Hey there! How've you been?

Would you mind taking a look at my latest short story, Genesis? You can find it in my portfolio. Specifically, I'd probably like advice on dialogue and natural sounding prose.

Thanks very much!

I Believe In The Dog Poo Fairy.
Could you do some comical lyrics?

Could you please review a Chapter of my story Truant please? I don't mind what you focus on, I just need some advice on anything and everything - I'm that type of gal
Here's the link: Truant - Chapter Four

I'm going to start on everyone's reviews once review day starts ^^

Fantastical Book 1: The Mirror (Chapter Four)

Hi! I was wondering if you could take a look at this. I would love feedback on characters mostly, but also word choice and if everything flows pretty smoothly. Grammar would be great, but it's not as important. If you also find some glaring problems with it, it would be great to get something back on that as well.

I know that this is chapter 4, so if you need to read the other chapters there are links to them on the same page. And if you don't want to, then just the chapter will do fine. Thanks!

Hey!

I would love it if you could review my ongoing novel 'Crazy Little Love Story'. I would like to make it known to you that the version I have up right now is the original, unedited version. I hope you can provide me insight on any errors that I might've missed in order to apply even more corrections to it. Thanks in advance and it's very nice to meet you!

Hey! Thanks for doing this!

I was wondering if you could review my novel, Rise of the Fallen: Prologue. I would also love it if you focused around character, dialogue, and plot and word choice. Haha maybe a bit of everything but mostly those that I listed. And helpful criticism is always welcome.

Lord of the Rings is awesome by the way =)

HEY YOU. Yeah you. I have two things for you; one's a fantasy that involves lesbians, trans charries (later) and gay god-boys (also later), and fighting oppression and freeing Starchildren. I posted the first chapter here.

The second thing involves a really troubled gay kid, but the story has very little to do with his sexuality (directly? idk). Read the disclaimer at the top because there's some tricky stuff in here.
(18+ rating).

Pick one or do both! Totes up to you.

I need a good critique on my short story:

As The Wind Blows

What would you change about it? What needs fixing?
Thank you in advance!

Are you still looking to review?

Hey, it would be awesome if you could review my poem "Hope" or "The Struggle". I want to know what people think about my work. I'm not sure what you can focus on; I guess whatever catches your eye. I'm still fairly new on this site. Thanks mate!
Here's the link: Hope

Still doing reviews? If so, I have need of reviews. You don't mind jumping into the middle of everything do you, even if it will be a bit confusing, maybe a lot? I would love if you could do this one here, to start things out, maybe see if you want to do more chapters of it. I would be pleased to review anything for you as well, just ask, doesn't matter if it's poetry, short story, novel, article. Here is the link to it. I could really use a very critical approach to my story, tho I can't tell you what I would have you specifically look for.

Where the Black Sheep Wrest - (Ch. 13): Reign Check