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Great! If everyone's already shared their thoughts on the title, it seems like we're leaning towards Dungeons and Detectives--- if you'd prefer a different one, though, by all means, share! ...

Anna isn't special, she's just often inconvenienced.

Hook. Line. And sinker. You got me there. The narrative was compelling, and the characters were lovely. Kitty and Max have such an interesting dynamic, and the dialogue was quite ...

This is absolutely heartwarming. The characters are personable, the dialogue was easy to follow, and the theme is pure comfort. I did spy some forgotten quotation marks, so please keep ...

If this is a diary from a character's perspective, it's a very interesting read, honestly. It feels pretty incomplete, but the general intent and emotions are there. Author, if this ...

Hello there, human! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Shalt we commence with the mutated S’more? Top Graham Cracker - The protagonist is done with the Jester. He’s ...

In which Charax discusses an alternative

Hi, I’m Toast and I’m here to give a quick review of this short story you’ve concocted. I’ll be writing my thoughts as I’m reading so my opinions might change ...

#19 My Guardian Angel Poetic Style - 3 - Rhyming Inspiration - 4 - Rhyme Scheme/i] [i]Coin Flip - N/A - N/A Lyric: N/A Running Jumping Flying and Dancing Right ...

I See Me in You Today's Inspiration: Today’s song was Over My Head (Cable Car) by The Fray. I rolled Author‘s Choice with song theme. So, I decided to write ...

Hello Hello, I hope you dont mind me popping in with a review. Now You have to forgive me If I get anything wrong as I have not read any ...

The Plot In a galaxy far, far. away, where a powerful, dark Empire rules with an iron hand, you are one the few who have escaped its clutches. Whether a ...

Hello! Welcome to the OOC for Above A Red Moon. Below you will find relevant links and information related to the Star Wars and AARM universe. Browse at you leisure! ...

Earlier that afternoon... This was beginning to feel like a group project in which Eve did all of the work and her partners did none of it, and yet, they ...

In the not too distant past a dragon of great power is brought before the king of the night. Just who is this mysterious human?

Hello! Thank you so much for requesting a review on my forum! With this review, I'll try my best to really focus on the small details of your writing. So ...