Young Writers Society

Yes! this poem is very relatable in a way. I can somewhat relate to this because I got my mothers looks and my fathers frustration. this goes through what its ...

Shanti & Cinderella Without any guards or security, she slipped through her window and went on her journey, deciding it would be best if she did it alone. She was ...

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Hey, Kaerae here again! Thought I would review the longer version since the first draft was amazing. First of all, I like the structure you added to this one. It ...

I really like this poem. It captures the feeling of when you like someone really well. It also tells of how if they do know you like them but you ...

Hello! I clicked on this poem as soon as I read the title because I love the front bottoms. I also read the description and it intrigued me to also ...

This is a longer version of one my previous poems by the same name

Hey, KaeRae here! I feel like this isn't much of a review, but I'm here anyway. I genuinely can't find anything to critique on. I like the use of the ...

Rip drunk james

It looks great! Can't wait to see what everyone else comes up with!

Hello, my fellow writing friend! This is a thrilling work! Let's dive right in... A Little Skimming - First Impressions OH GOSH THIS IS AMAZING. At first the story kicks ...

Seems cool!

Hi! I am here with a review of this work. The overall first impression looks pretty good. I see minor typos (I'm sure there should be commas in some sentences ...

Hello there, human! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Shalt we commence with the possessed S’more? Top Graham Cracker - Rose is given two days to clean her ...

A poem about lost friends and synesthesia

Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary Josephine imagined standing beneath star-lit skies on the darkest of nights, where the heavens stretched endlessly above her, adorned with countless shimmering conste