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Hello there I sucks in all who allow it to I don't know but this sentence is not right, maybe I'm not reading it correctly. Anyways, I totally agree with ...

Hello there Well this is a really deep piece. I liked it, it gave me a lot to think about after I read it. I especially liked the first stanza, ...

Hello there and welcome Well, you definitely have good command of the language I can give you that much. There are a few things I can suggest: Firstly, try to ...

Hello there I actually love your poem. It is really deep and I thought you expressed your emotions well though sometimes I thought that they were over exaggerated like, But ...

Hello there Wow, I think I am seeing some pretty good love poetry today. I enjoyed this a lot. You did a pretty good job. I liked your use of ...

Hey there ladyworks This was interesting. Some deep stuff. I can see you had a lot on your mind and a lot to say. I liked it very much, the ...

Hello there Wow, this is really good. I enjoyed it very much. I hope you know that I can’t stand That you don’t notice me That he said I was ...

Hello there Well, I actually loved this piece. I felt the emotion just fine. The meaning or your expression is deep and this is good if you want to convince ...

Hello there I really do not feel this poem. It feels like a bunch of words thrown at me and so I don't feel any flow or connection. Perhaps it ...

Hello there Well I liked the poem; the idea in general. But to be honest I did not like the execution that much, I felt it was just fine and ...

Hello there I will be honest, I did not like it that much. It was just fine. I thought that the first too stanzas were just amazing but then after ...

Hello there This was a great poem and I quite enjoyed it. It was deep and the level of emotion was just right. I also like how you ended it. ...

Hey there originalhobbit I liked this poem. But I think something is missing. I don't know, maybe you skipped a little connection somewhere in there. Maybe it's because the emotion ...

Hello there You will forgive me but I did not understand some parts of the poem, but let me break it down. The birds, silhouettes spreading their wings, take flight ...

Hello there Well, to be honest, I am not sure if I understand the poem that well, or maybe what I grasped from it is not what you were going ...