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Hello there Well, this is basically what I like to call a deep poem! And I liked it. There were some parts though which I did not get when I ...

Hey there I have no problem with posting little explanations of the poem. There is no rule against it. But next time don't do it because I think it's fun ...

Hello there I had a problem with the lack of punctuation in your poem. I don't know, it made some parts very confusing and I had to read over and ...

Hello there tinkerfee and welcome to YWS Cool avatar. Anyways, you have something promising going on here. I think that your writing has a lot of potential. There are just ...

Hello there and welcome to YWS I love this poem. I nearly gave you a standing ovation but I am not in the right place to do that. I loved ...

Hey there and welcome to YWS First of all, love your avatar. Anyways, your avatar is not the only thing I liked, you are a great storyteller. I loved your ...

Hey there, I once read that we have more than 25 dreams every night and that we only remember those that affected us most mentally. Sometimes you don't remember having ...

Hello there Well, I liked it. There wasn't much happening though but I liked how simple it was. You definitely showed good writing skills; good grammar, good descriptive tools, good ...

Hello there and welcome to YWS! :) Alright, this is a promising story line. It's not boring, there is suspense, I have the urge to read on until the end. ...

Hello there :D Alright, before I comment I will just outline mistakes I spotted as I read, 1. I noticed that you had a tendency of using "don't" instead of ...

Hello there. Well, I think I liked it. I liked your metaphors, they were deep. The problem I had with this poem is that there is very little in it. ...

Hello there and welcome to YWS! :D Alright, now I read your piece and I think that your grammar needs a lot of work. I am guessing that English is ...

Hello there Jeanette and welcome to yws! I think this a good poem. I liked it. The poem does have a lot of emotion. Is my structure really a sure ...

Hello there Alright, so this poem was pretty deep. I was drawn in from the word go. It has enough emotion and I am satisfied. You don't know what it's ...

Hello there Emelyeverafter and welcome to yws! I think that peanut19 did a good job at pinpointing the spelling mistakes. I think your poem needs some punctuation so that some ...