zeldalex

Hi FireSpyGirl! I really enjoyed the word choice in this poem (lithe especially, and the repetition of certain key words) and the images in this poem. Probably my favorite part ...

Hello! Your writing is quite nice. Asides from a few minor grammatical mistakes ("peaking" should be "peeking" for example), it flows very well and I never had to stop and ...

Hello! First off, there's a certain rhythm to this poem that I truly admire. I can't quite place my finger on it, but I really wanted to read this aloud ...

Hello! I have to say, I enjoyed the descriptions in this story quite a bit. The opening paragraph is a very nice opening to this, even if it doesn't quite ...

Hello! First of all, I really like the tension between Lady Luck and Lancelot. You do a great job of showing their different morals (I think probably the part where ...

I'm not sure whether to start crying or to re-read and then start crying. I like the general poeticness of this piece, and this actually made me a little misty ...

I actually really like this, and I enjoy how there's a problem right off the bat. I'm not usually a fan of animal stories, as usually it's just an advertising ...