yusraali

I really liked this, it's tense and you left it off at such a good note. Just one thing, say "It's contents splashing across the floor" instead of "splashed.I guess ...

It's actually good that you vent anger through poetry, because it makes it more powerful and innovative. Nowadays a lot of people get judged by the most mundane things, so ...

I really, really liked this. Your use of comparative words makes it compelling and insightful, giving a powerful way to create imagery. So many themes already picked up and the ...

I really like this poem, not much to point out apart from the fact that it's "breathe" and not "breath," sorry I don't want to nitpick and I know it's ...

For some reason I really like this, it's surprisingly fresh yet innovative. Continue writing!

Thank you, I already love every one of you on here already!

Thank you so much, I'm happy you mentioned that! :-)

Thank you so much I honestly appreciate it, and do not worry I love all constructive criticism because it helps to improve my writing!

This is absolutely marvellous, I love your interpretation of nature.