yubbies21

This is gorgeous! I love how you talked about each season and gave unique descriptions to each! My favorite part of this poem was really beautiful! Maybe not, beautiful, but ...

Where she sits burns like a fire of darkness, a flame that doesn't have heat but consumes all the same. As I'm about to enter the room, I could feel ...

This was a great story. I didn't enjoy it much, but I have a very different sense of humor, so I'm positive others would die of laughter. If so, then ...

Hello! You captured this idea perfectly, even though the idea is sad and terrible. This past especially caught in my mind: They only check the wrists, Not the thighs. And ...

Hello! The only way to describe this as is textured. It just had that certain life or death feel, like something is about to happen to end the world, like ...

Happy Review Day! It's yubbies21 here! While it was a small chapter, it was nicely done. You are excellent with narration! There were a few mistakes I found, but @Dreamy ...

Hello! There are quite a few grammar mistakes, but it's pretty good, especially if English isn't your first language. EloquentDragon got to that, so I'll focus more on the bigger ...

Hello! It's review Day! This is a well thought out presentation. It covers a lot of information and is unique in doing so. I found a few little nitpicks, but ...

The beginning seemed a little bit stand-offish. It didn't have very much description, it moved to fast. You explained six(?) years in one sentence...This just isn't enough for me. My ...

Hello! It's a wonderful Day! Do you know why? It's....Review Day! Ooohhh! The beginning of a book! All day I've been reviewing random chapters of books to empty the green ...

Hello! It's review Day! I like the sort of swearing you have one of the characters use: "DEAR GODS AND GODDESSES," I gasp, It's unique! Very different from what I've ...

Hello! It's Review Day! I'm just here working on cleaning up the last few works in the Green Room... I haven't done too many reviews in the novel area, so ...

Hello! Very unique story...I was drawn in by the description you wrote... I am Yubbies, Newest Knight of the Green Room. I haven't read the first chapter, but look forward ...

I've never read the Harry Potter Series, so this, to me, was creative and unique. Others may complain that you are copying, but I don't think so. This story has ...

Hello there! *Waves excitedly* It's review Day! I haven't read the previous chapters, so I'm not exactly sure what is going on...But I'll do my best. Also, I don't usually ...