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Wow! I wasn't kidding when I said I loved your poetry! I'm just going to have to keep on reading your work! This poem has a great meaning. If you ...

Hello! Like I said before, I love your poetry so much that I just can't get enough of it! So I'm back with yet another review! Really, this poem is ...

Hello! I'm here to review, just as I promised! To be honest, I had already looked at this poem and put it on my review list earlier this week without ...

Hello again! I really like your poetry! I keep coming back for more! This poem is really so simple and straight-forward that this won't be much of a review... I ...

Hello Alfonso! Good Luck with Review Day! Every writer has experienced Writer's Block at one point or another, so it's easy for everybody on this site to relate to. I ...

Hello! Right off the bat, I'm just going to say: It was nice, but I didn't like it as much as the previous chapters. Your metaphors and such just were ...

Hello! I found this to be yet another chapter of yours that is excellent! It has lots of details, from showing more about who David is, to anything he saw. ...

Hello! This is such a long work, you aren't likely to gain many reviews, nut here I am, ready to do my part! This story doesn't flow well, the words ...

First things first...I have no idea how to pronounce your Main character's name. And that really bugs me. Xxis is a really unique name, but the way I'm pronouncing it, ...

Hello! Such a nice poem! And in nice, I mean beautifully written... It's so sad what happened to this girl. Your rhyme seemed a little bit forced in some parts. ...

Hello! Hey, I saw that you are new to YWS! Welcome! This piece of writing was not what I expected it to be. It was better! You selected a very ...

They look like tear-drops...I love it when people creatively arrange their poetry to match the message of the poem. The poem flows well and has no places where the rhythm ...

Hello! It's yubbies21, here with a (hopefully) helpful review! I liked this a lot, but it does have some room for polishing. I'm confused, maybe you meant were? Sometimes men ...

Hello! It's been a while since I reviewed some fantasy chapters, but this peaked my interest. One thing I noticed was the excellent descriptions threaded all through-out the story. It ...

Hello! Happy Review Day! This story is different than other things I've read lately. Your Main Character is funny, witty, and seemingly nice, but he's got another, more rude side ...